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Script Review and Some changes
🕑 Added 2015-07-02 17:10:55 +0000 UTCInitially Badge of pride was set to be 60 pages. But after hammering out the script a few times I feel the story will be better told in 30 instead. Im checking in with Image to see if this will still vibe (i'm sure it will) Initially the contrast was between the 4 characters but it became obvious to me that it would better to contrast the two polar opposites as it makes for strong story telling (jesse and taylor) with marty and mu supporting the general concepts.
Script wise it's been a bit rough to push past the initial first 10 pages as things seem hard to manage once they are are the parade BUT I feel it's coming together a bit. You can check the script so far here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XcHNrzy12qO2EAllsyiGxqVNZy6PpzNXeWNU-f-xxf8/pub
The designs seem to finally have found a solid shape for me. Some of you may feel the look is a bit different then previous works but for me Marty and Co have always been about shifting my style a bit. Could be for better or for worse who knowns. I hear the complaint for a while now that "cross platform marty" was best marty but I honestly don't agree. There are tons of flaws in those comics. I do acknowledge that there are maybe some positive but art isn't easy to control and keep in a solid form.
Alright back to work.
