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Scene 4 - Scene 9
🕑 Added 2024-05-05 01:49:56 +0000 UTCI got a lot done today and most of Part 1 done! So that's reason for excitement. I want to thank you guys who are supporting me! It means the world I have an audience I can share these ideas with still and I hope you guys enjoy what I have to say with these characters still!
I hit about 4500 words now for the outline. This is ignoring the re-writes and actual dialog. We will see where it hits but its likely 9k total. Yeah even comic scripts can be lengthy. Real Girth!
I have attached the reminder of the script outline here, I will be finalizing it in the next few days and posting it again soon!
SCENE 4
The smoke dissipates into vapors and transforms into clouds of haze.
Mu, intermixed with a crowd of club going raver types trash around as Mu chills amongst the chaos.
A girl runs up to Mu from the misty laser light show haze.
"Hey Mu, I heard your dicks is super fucking huge!!!!" She looks back to her friends laughing, in hysterics over daring their friend.
"Yeah! 12...I think? Wanna see it?"
The girl looks down to Mu's massive cock, semi soft, shape outlined by his cargo shorts. Her eyes bulge out in shock and mild arousal.
Mu is elbowed by a yes as unknown character. "Come on..." she lets out mildly exasperated.
My shrugs hands up, gesturing. "What?! She asked?!"
The stranger responds "Not in public, and not at work, we talked about this!"
Mu gives a dorky whoops expression and the mist swallows the scene, lights flashing, Green, Red, Yellow...Yellow...Yellow.
SCENE 5
Marty, groceries in one hand, daydreaming as he waits at a cross light, the light sprinkling has covered the streets with a textured sheen.
His eyes lost in the amber glow, a face in the light, a lions mane...
A man wearing a thick woolen hoodie stinking of (you know the kind pot smokers wear) bumps into Marty snapping him from his reverie.
He looks over annoyed, the man is accompanied with a friend, and glances over the street mid conversation.
For a moment he thought it was Jesse...Why would he care if it was anyway...
Jesse has his plans and Marty has his.
marty lifts up his grocery bag and looks at the pint of icecream.
"It just you and me now buddy"
Marty smirks in a genuine but mildly depressing way.
He notices the light change and skips over across the street.
Panning up to the city skyline, Taylor's apartment in the upper floors of a posh yet still affordable neighborhood.
The lights from the window flash, and pulsate again, rainbow in hue.
SCENE 6 (This scene is HIGHLY EXPERIMENTAL)
Taylor's Condo.
Taylor, in a darkened livingroom, actively playing a multiplayer game, bluetooth earphones on.
As he wiggles around you can hear moaning that isn't his.
As more scene is revealed, it seems that Taylor has been sitting on the lap of a rather large bear who had been sitting motionless, allowing Taylor's gyration to stimulate him, it is unclear if he is naked, or there is penetration, but whatever Taylor is doing the bear likes.
Taylor cuts through the moans as he replies to an unheard question."Benni? Oh yeah he's still here, being the old couch potato he always is."
Taylor grins and looks back over his shoulder seductively, smirking.
"Oh yeah he's still Married"
Taylor flicks up his left ring fingers and smirks, its paired with a few other. Clearly trophies.
Benni, blushes, his face matted in sweat and lust. Hands gripped to the sides of the couch as Taylor continues to gyrate and play games. Benni's hands missing a wedding ring\visible imprint of missing ring.
"Hey listen it's not my fault I'm a magnet for married men. I didn't CHOOSE to be the perfect Daddy's girl...", Taylor savors the last bit of sentence, glancing back to Benni who is visibly now cumming either inside Taylor or onto himself it is unclear still. Benni lets out several moans.
Taylor smiles a smugly, this is too easy.
The tv lets out a "Headshot!" from the announcer reminding Taylor --
"Hey...That better not be in my hair..." he looks over his shoulder, Benni finding composure shrugging, shaking his head.
-- "Hmm what? Talking to Benni..." Taylor leans forward taking the weight off of Benni and showing him to go shower.
He lumbers off into a dim hallway, as he does another stranger walks past him, open bathrobe and sleepily meanders to the kitchen space, having just woken up.
"Shit!!!"
Taylor's team just lost the match.
"This is bullshit, no it's not cause I'm fucking during gaming. NO! I told you it makes me better!?? K- Whatever. I have to take care of things anyway. No, you are the one that is gay. Yes. Hahah. bye!"
Taylor leans forward on all fours to turn off the console, his tail wagging excitedly, always in the need for stimulation.
He throws himself back into his sectional sofa, a mass of pillows and (furs, we'll have to figure out what the ramifications of this means in another lifetime).
The new stranger is now fixing themselves a coffee and drinking it groggily in the backdrop of the open concept condo.
Taylor terminally online, flips his phone open to do whatever it is you do the second you turn it on and. In Taylor case it's to get an endorphin rush from being sexually desired on Gwindur, he checks his notifications and sees Jessee pop up again briefly and pop off again.
As Taylor fiddles with his phone the new occupant meanders over to Taylor and kneels in front of him, pulling out his penis and sucks his cock, all while Taylor never acknowledging the sex act.
Taylor tuts to himself, but is also reminded of the conversation with Marty earlier that day.
MINI SCENE 7 (flash back, thought bubble)
This section will be a recap and outline of the general concept of the conversation earlier and outline the next 6 chapters in general ways by mentioning the following things.
Could be as simple as quotable snippets of their conversations key points.
Marty's on and off with Jesse
Mu's status as potentially taken and impossible to pin down
Marty's Birthday party (Next weekend) at a marina with a two day stay
over at his parents beach house
SCENE 8
Marty, knuckle deep in his icecream watching home repair reality tv in his antiseptic home, grays, tans, teals, straight angles, brushed steel, flat shades.
Curiously, wearing a heavy wool hoodie similar to the one the man wore earlier, ill fitting and oversized, clearly belonging to someone else (Jesse).
His phone rings and he absent mindedly wipes his mouth with the sleeve, as though hes regressed back into his teen years.
His hands maze their way through the way to heavy and long sleeves to finally peek out and snag his phone. It's Taylor.
He mutes his tv and accepts the call.
"HEEY GURRRL", Taylor cackles. Marty pulls his phone from his ear briefly.
"Hey! So?!"
"So?! I should be saying that to you...mmf"
"Saying what? Mmf?"
"--No. I mean, we doing this birthday boy? We gonna get you som Lion Dick for your birthday!"
Marty blushing immediately, stiffening up, pulling his fee in sitting indian style, and looking down at his clothes, a obvious Jesse hoodie classic.
"Come on don't pretend you don't miss that prince albert tickling those tonsils" Taylor cackles again.
"Jeeze Taylor, I forgot how--"
"Ouch not so hard!" Taylor blurts out indirectly
"What was that? Are you...fucking right now?"
"Not for long if this naughty little boy doesn't learn to use his tongue"
"...Mhmm...You where saying" Marty retorts unimpressed yet a bit jealous
"Just saw your boy pop up on Gwindur, didn't you call him? earlier today? No response? We doing the Marina or what? Let's get...--yeah like that...Uh.. The crew back together!!!"
Marty checks his phones notifications, finds no response from Jesse. Had forgotten and even learned long ago to stop waiting for a response from him so never occurred to follow up.
"God I hate this, ph---nope nothing. No calls..."
"Well...If i see his little ass and bigly dick show up on Gwindur again I'll let him know to shuffle on over pants down in your direction. You owe him a spanking"
Marty blushes...Spanking Jesse, he would never allow it, so why is it suddenly all he wanted to do to that sob...
"Oh fuck...--Uhh. Marty? I gotta go for a bit--"
"Un hun--"
"Toodles! (quiet) .......ok..now hold it there while i--"
Taylor finally hangs up.
Marty face still mildly flushed from all the pure sexual energy Taylor regularly exudes.
He flips over to the notification app on his phone and flops face first on the couch beside him.
SCENE 9
Multichoice
Jesse finally calls,
Marty opens Gwindur and searches Jesse's area to see him show up online and get an answer from him.
Jesse calls intended to call someone else but calls Marty by accident.
Jesse shows up at Marty's door.
Marty takes of the hoodie ready to close the book on his times with Jesse and finds a memento or a note left unread inside.
Other thing.
