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Summer Won't Last pg. 22 - alt and sketch
🕑 Added 2025-03-19 05:03:08 +0000 UTCI PROMISE THE DICKSUCKING WILL COMMENCE 😭
One of my biggest problems with this comic is how it focuses on Levi's perspective. We get his narration, his thoughts, his POV basically. This greatly limits how much insight we get to Dachi, his thoughts and motivations. By the time I noticed this, it was too late to change things up without it being very jarring, haha. I understand comic porn isn't high art, but a lesson I've taken from this practice comic is to try to maintain a more neutral POV in future stories. I basically wrote this page when I was frustrated at how elusive Dachi's feelings are, to give him a chance to explain himself.
I hope you guys enjoy this page! And thank you so much for supporting my work!!
Comments
Bonfire Demon
GET TO IT, BOY 😈
Bonfire Demon
I'm very happy that it's something you find valuable :) I liked this page a lot, too
Amari Vega
I adore the check-in. Gives the characters depth.
Memyx
This is so cute. :] Good for them... Now, suck the soul outta him, Levi. 😌
Flux Y.
I love it. I can't wait for the last 3 pages
