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Summer Won't Last pg. 19 - alt and sketch
🕑 Added 2025-01-20 22:07:58 +0000 UTCI had a hard time deciding whether or not dialogue was actually necessary for this page.
I wanted them to have a sort of breathless realization that transcends "thinking". A kind of animal and pure state of mind where overthinking things can ruin the moment... but it felt strange to have a page without dialogue and I am not sure in my art enough to convey the sort of mindset they have, haha.
For the time being, I will put both up here. Hopefully with the context of the next few pages, I can decide which is the "final" page by the time I upload to social media.
Thank you so much for supporting my work!
Comments
Lucidius
Its cute how theyre fueld by feelings atm
Bonfire Demon
Thank you so much for the encouraging words!
Dragon king
Perfectly sums up what I wanted to say.
Feng
I think both approaches have their merits with this page. Levi's inner thoughts emphasizes him capturing the moment, after how much he's been longing for it. Whereas the no dialogue page allows for reader immersion and allowing the two's expressions to do all the 'talking'. Despite your misgivings, I feel like your art says a lot by expressions and body language alone. This s a spectacular page and I'm eager to see where it goes from here!
Roddy Sabers
So hottttt
Timespacetiger
I can't wait to get to the next two weeks!
Bonfire Demon
Yeah me too haha. Really looking forward to drawing the rest!
Leydon
I'm so proud of him đ
Bonfire Demon
Thank you! Yeah, they're in too deep to back out now. đ
Bonfire Demon
Levi's finally going for it! đ¤
Bonfire Demon
Big vulnerable dudes are the best đ¤
Timespacetiger
Levi,leave the rest to instinct and truly feel the love between each other. I'm feeling a bit jealous!
Lee Pilners
YES I LOVE IT WHEN BUFF MEN CLOSE THEIR EYES
Vogvogcadaver
CHAT THEY DOING THAT
Memyx
This is so good, oh my gosh. đł No words needed, they're just going with the moment. I love it.
Leydon
MWAHAHAHAHA YESSS YESSSSSSS!!!
