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Patreon Poll Pic #5

🕑 Added 2017-01-21 11:17:34 +0000 UTC

Comments

NiceGuy18

I've actually just started the anime and I have gotten rather fascinated by it. I do agree Ms. Smith looks a little dry but that is still some very impressive work.

Blockerman

What a lovely piece! I like Monster Musume, it's a very fun series and I love your rendition of the characters. This fate of Ms. Smith is entirely appropriate considering how much trouble she causes the main characters. However, considering how small and obnoxious she is, I'm surprised Papi has found her way down Mia's gullet. Maybe have everyone staring at Mia with her belly bulged and feathers all over her face while she's doing her best to look innocent. Maybe looking behind the drapes to 'help find Papi'. There's a million good ideas out there, but you did such a good job with the Monster Musume theme, I figured you wouldn't hate another option in that department.

Orchestration

It is nice! However I think Ms. Smith could do with having a slimey/wet look to her. She looks a little to dry for being inside someone. Also melting clothes would be a nice effect as well.