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Rumble Cloud

. “Hur dur, this sign is only mine and no one can use… Let me kill everyone who uses them to show that I’m tuff. Hur dur.” His scary persona is crumbling

Matheus Alves Celestino

were is Wanda?

Matheus Alves Celestino

Hey I remembered this now, but isn't there a My Hero Academia movie where there is a villain with the lesser power to alter reality? He calls himself Dark Might, does that mean Hector also has this power? And how much stronger it is now?

Matheus Alves Celestino

Hey can someone tell me if Hector has ever drunk from (batch of heart shaped herb) like this is something he pulls out in the 2nd chapter of the story but I don't remember him using it. Does Hector have this and never used it?

KingSpy25i .

Thank you for the chapter 🙏

Matheus Alves Celestino

here in second sidekick he says. (And I finally copied Rogue’s power… So even if it’s come from a lineage, I can also be part of it. I delayed long enough to get Rogue’s power because it was more problematic than it was worth, but after starting to create Artificial Zoans of different species, things changed…)

Matheus Alves Celestino

so I was going to mention that in my review

Matheus Alves Celestino

I almost forgot, I still vote for a chapter with Harley undergoing therapy with the X-Men

Kaizel

Didn't it mention in a previous chapter that he already copied Rogue's x-gene

Matheus Alves Celestino

Very well, have a great Sunday everyone. Part One: Harley and Saeko. We all know where the inspiration for the spiral brand came from, don't pretend you don't know... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) What a view Hector must be, sortudo da porra. OH yes honorable mention to the classic red Harley Quinn outfit, such a sexy classic By the way, Harley is a Heroine who doesn't intend to hide who she is. So having a chapter from someone's perspective or from her own, about her daily life and the beginning of this exposed life would be interesting to read. Saeko, our dear hot psychopath, naturally knows how to mess with her man, what could I say, speaking of her, a chapter from her point of view would be interesting too, after all her life must be almost, almost an anime, a student who transforms into a heroine. Also, I remember that she is a classmate of a future X-Men. Part Two: Experiment. I knew this wouldn't "work", because this is a power that requires time, and in Marvel where you say "the day after tomorrow I will have super strength." then on the same day someone throws a car at you. What I mean is, in a world like Marvel, all powers must be for yesterday, anything you will have in the future will be necessary for today, it's a cliché. But I'm not saying that this is useless to read, because seeing the protagonist try and "fail" also shows that he is human and "makes mistakes", this was not a mistake in itself, hence the quotation marks, but it is something for the future. Part Three: Nemesis and others. Nemesis is part of the group of summons that we know are there, but we hardly see him. I can't blame the author for that, since I don't see them advancing the story, but I hope for a chapter for them, or a plot for them, but Nemesis, Robin Lucy, Sgent 47, Erwin Smith, Saul Goodman, are in very different jobs. Nemesis is evolving, Robin is "working" for Hydra, 47 is in the criminal underworld, Erwin for the police, Saul is the lawyer who gives a chance to those Eidolon arrests. Some of them have material for work. Robin could be a chapter for Captain America, or even the Avengers, or Chun-li there in China against the organizations there, if I'm not mistaken she's a police officer too, for example... yeah, I only thought of those hehe but as I said it's hard to think of something for them, but I hope for something for the future. I'll skip the Eidolon part... What can I say, rich people are weird. poor criminals? my ass. Part Four: X-Men. The guys who wanted Eidolon to copy Rogue's powers must have had an orgasm by now, I can't blame them, Hector's powers can now practically go from 100 to 1000 with him. Not to mention that the only thing Hector needs to do is let the power adapt to his body and naturally he will learn to control it, not to mention the power up that the power will gain, for him and One For All. I don't have much to say about them, the future of Dark Phoenix seems to be far away, that's good, besides, don't forget to help Rogue and Forget me not, if he's already in the X-Men, although Eidolon's powers must still be adapting to him. I wonder how far the X-Men's teachings will go with Eidolon helping, he can give some power lessons, like in that movie SKY HIGH, why not after all. Also Cassandra is jealous hehe cute, this is a great character development, these little moments, from someone so inexpressive to gradually loosening up, which is good for her. Ororo Damn Hector is making a Herculean effort to resist this thicc ass... Maybe in the future. a very far future, or another universe. since the Harem limit is only for the "main" universe. I really hope for more X-Men plots, like more trips to other universes, after all Madame Pryor from Universe 8280 is "eyeing" Eidolon. Oh yes pls some fantastic four plots, not just by the X-Men lives the man. And honorable mention to our dear Black Cat, her instincts must be tingling

kassiano lisboa

Bom dia, ótimo domingo a todos!


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