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Trouble Undersea: Part 01

🕑 Added 2025-07-20 10:54:36 +0000 UTC

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Elixir

I know that pain man unexpected deaths hit you the hardest but they went out loved and cared for. Take pride in the love you gave

Qasim mashraqi

Sorry to hear about that but you keep your head up and the good phase will be close.

Nazarickk

Take care of yourself. Thanks for the chapter

CkLance

Well wishes bro. Take a break if you feel you need one. ✌️

Drake

all the best. rough patches suck, so you do you man, keep your head up, you've got plenty of people cheering you on

Sebastian

Take care 🙂 and great chapter

Davidmas2307

Cuídate amigo, gracias por el capítulo

Blod

Take car of yourself man. And thank for the chapter as always a super chapter!

doomdude

Thanks for the chapter. It was good. Probably one of my favorite ones of the last couple.👍 And about your dog My condolences.I had to do the same thing recently with mine.

Matheus Alves Celestino

Now I think I edited all I need

Matheus Alves Celestino

Cara não posso dizer que te entendo completamente mas posso dizer que conheço essa sensação. eu já tive duas cachorras e ambas tiveram que ser sacrificadas, uma por tumor e outro muito velha. Alem disso já perdi 3 dos meus 4 avós também. Sem falar nas mais recentes, eu achei 6 filhotes abandonados e eu e meus pais pegamos, mas dos 6 uma foi adotada, e 3 morreram um a um sem a gente poder fazer nada. É foda cara. Não posso te oferecer muito conforto, sou um estranho do outro lado do Brasil, mas embora meu comentário sozinho não possa fazer muito, NOSSOS comentário podem pelo menos oferecer um conforto aceitável, não é muito, mas espero que ajude em algo. Fique bem.

Matheus Alves Celestino

Okay, here's the analysis. First, I don't know how I feel about getting what I wanted, but in a twisted way, almost like in those original genie stories, granting the wish, but at a price. I got a bit of character development, but... Porra. But that's for later. About the chapter. X-Men. Man, Hector's fanbase is crazy, but hilarious. Kitty, as always, is the living representation of many readers. Besides, Jubilee is right, it's valid, naturally a female werewolf for me. A big, thicc female werewolf, pls. Besides, someone finally thought or said that Eidolon can become a woman, and I can see this evolving into them theorizing that Eidolon is actually a straight woman. Why do you ask? Simple. Proof one: Eidolon is always surrounded by women, and some are drop-dead gorgeous. But he doesn't show any reaction! Proof two!: Eidolon hides his secret identity extremely well. It wouldn't be wrong to think that the best way to do this would be to naturally alter his true gender, thus attracting people's attention to looking for a man instead of a woman, which would be "his real identity." Proof three!!: Most of the SCP members seen so far are mostly women. Lady Jade, Huntress, Shadow, or the Purple Samurai (Murasaki-Something) or Isabella (I don't remember her secret identity, teb takecare?) are all women!!! Coincidence? I don't think so! But seriously, I hope to see this shown in some chapter. Admit it, it's creative and funny. Miles. It was good to see him again. Wow, embarrassing Spider-Men (or Black Cat) seems like a lot of fun, hehe. Besides, given the way Hector didn't deny it, it's reasonable to assume he has the coordinates of every Spider-Man who appeared in the film.(help the anime spider man, her uncle ben is a bastard) Maybe with some limitations, I imagine. Besides, it's funny to see the thought (Look, they're happy... he/she is going to die, isn't he/she?) because it's hilarious and a valid thought. Huntress. Huh. It's nice to see her point of view helping Virgil. The guy deserves it, but at the same time, being realistic about what can actually help him. In a pretty mediocre fic, I can see this little support group being used. Plus, her view of relationships is realistic. No one is like Shego, who doesn't care much about her world. She's like Virgil, but unlike him, she has more of a feeling of helplessness than perhaps "having failed in her superhero duty." So, yes, it was a good change of pace and gave the story a new perspective. 4. Man, it's good to see a team united. Normally, in fics where the author wants a character, but she is with another romantic interest or partner, it's normal to "diminish" or even antagonize them to get the reader thinking that way (Wow, what a jerk, he doesn't deserve to be with her! I hope the MC takes her to the Harem). But not here, great. Reed shows concern and care for his friends; the guy is just a workaholic. He knows how to do complex equations in his head, but he's a pain in relationships, romantic or otherwise. So, another point for this story. I could comment on how Susan was the only one to do something here, but that's totally plausible; after all, she was the only one who could do something stealthy in that situation. I could easily see that happening in an old comic of theirs. "The rest.": Taking Leviathan isn't an exaggeration. As Cortana said, he and Machia is an exaggeration. I'd say take Leviathan. Not simply because he's cool, but because it's a huge power play and intimidation. (Hector could always give Leviathan a breathing ability and one similar to that winged serpent from "Fantastic Beasts" which adapts its size to the environment, so Leviathan can go from a 16-kilometer creature to a small serpent. I remember a video where the serpent liked to hang out in its owner's hair. its cute and why not?) But back to my original line of thought: intimidation and power play. Since the quartet didn't mention Namor, that means they've never fought him before, and that means Namor must still have the horn that allows him to summon creatures/sea monsters. What does that have to do with it? Simple, imagine the scenario: you're a king and have an artifact that grants you control over the creatures in your kingdom. Then an enemy appears with a fucking HUGE and unknown creature, but most importantly, you have no control over it. Imagine the fear of that, of one of your greatest weapons being useless, and a creature that "should" protect your kingdom, can now destroy it. As I said, this is a great power play and intimidation; it can easily prevent future conflicts. Not related to the chapter. HOLY SHIT!! EVERY TIME I GO ON PINTEREST I FIND A PICTURE OF MIRKO, and it's not even a sexy photo, no, is just a photo in civilian clothes. BUT FUCK, SHE IS HOT! I VOTE FOR HAREM, FUCK IT!!! But seriously, she and Endeavor would be good in this universe since they're from a universe of proficiency heroes. If this Endeavor is the version with the scar, even better, he's calmer, and even though he's a jerk, the guy was number two, that means a lot. And Mirko... so many reasons, I don't have enough words for this... anyway, the review is too long, see you later!!! And I break the Google translate hahahaha more than 5.000 words!!!

Thereader

Great chapter but take a break if you need. Ps the trauma dumping is alright sometimes talking or writing about things helps.

Hazer0508

Sorry for your loss

FalseBeing

Thanks for the chapter and sorry for everything that has happened but life always has its losses that feel anguishing but still gotta move forward man. Hang in there

Dragonwolf

Thanks for the great chapter.Hang in there I know it tough now but it will get better

KingSpy25i .

Thank you for the great chapter 🙏 Also, hopefully you are doing better and I'll pry for your continued health and well-being.

CosmicStardust25

Evans bro, its fine life gets better sometimes and worse sometimes, its a rollercoaster.

WeirdoCommando

Take time for yourself man de-stress maybe spa, meditation, progressive muscle relaxation or something else. Worse case scenario seek out a therapist and always remember things can and will get better. Tipp: Sunlight, enough + stable sleep, Exercise, balanced diet help a lot more then you think

Lucas Panzenboeck

Hit misery back then :)👍🏻

Samuel Famakinwa

Damn hope everything is going better rn

Matheus Alves Celestino

So it's a fight hehe


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