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Trouble Undersea: Part 02

🕑 Added 2025-07-27 10:55:03 +0000 UTC

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Leo Santos

Tftc

KingSpy25i .

Thank you for the amazing chapter 🙏

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

Eskeal Efrem

Hey Evans if I remember right it's still 2006 in your story right? Could you stop the death of Steve Irwin please?🥺 It happend on September 4th 2006.

Matheus Alves Celestino

maybe he can say Darth Vader's phrase.

Von_Kraus

Holy peak. Bro is aura farming 100% of time isn't he? Is it the Vader assimilatiom taking effect? Also, Machia best waifu, best bro, goodest boy, best everything

Matheus Alves Celestino

Okay, let's get to the review. No seriously, I'm super excited, holy shit. This week is going to be fucked up for me. Okay. Pamela: This is really good to read. Some people might think negatively about it, saying it doesn't make sense, but considering her entire life, where nothing has been easy, it makes sense that she'd get defensive, or even attack even unprovoked. I was wondering if she wouldn't say something to Harley like, "I know his identity, I hold the strongest card," like trying to gain some power by threatening him, but Harley just said, "Then he'll break your neck." Which he wouldn't do, but he would think in and do something extreme like erase his face and name from her mind. Harley. God bless this crazy, sexy clown. She was direct, I respect that. She literally died, got a new life, and found another relationship. Leaving that for an ex is pretty asshole move. Not to mention without Yuri if the MC isn't there. Self-respect, bro. This "Yuri" falls (or almost) into the same category of using clones for sex; it's Weird Whit big W. If someone were to say something like Hector does the same, no, he doesn't. His separation is of soul and consciousness, so while he's saving the world and messing around on the computer, he's also getting laid, like all at once. This jerk's poker face is top-notch. Fantastic Four. It was nice to see more of their adventures; her interaction with Jonny is amazing, even if it's short. Furthermore, once again, we're shown the power of a beautiful woman to sense men's gazes. Susan, Widowmaker, Pamela, Harley, Ororo, Shego. These are all women I imagine have this power, except for the ones I mentioned and who were already mentioned in already having it. Although in Susan's case, Eidolon wouldn't have stopped eye contact with her. He is the exception. The fact that Namor believes her is due to the fact that this isn't the first case of betrayal. If the traitors try to send a, "Look at all the trash your people send to our home!" Eidolon can either argue that he's already cleaning the sea, or he can gather all the trash and turn it into dust, or use the gold experience to turn it into algae for new marine life. Extra: Mano!! Do!! Céu!! This was an awesome entrance!!! The atmosphere, the explanation, the ending. I can easily see Eidolon with a shadow over his face and glowing red eyes. Awesome lol. Maybe I forgot to mention something, I'll mention it later in a smaller comment, but that's all folks. Until next time. Thanks Evans, I hope you're feeling better.

Matheus Alves Celestino

Isso é um momento foda ×9.000 porra minha ansiedade tá no talo

Matheus Alves Celestino

PORRA QUE FODA!!!!!

Blod

Tftc

Samuel Famakinwa

Short but Tftc

Matheus Alves Celestino

Here we go!!!


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