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Incredible Luck With Women

🕑 Added 2025-10-05 10:49:23 +0000 UTC

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SawSomeSh!t

Kaleisan, bratha. I thought the same, like the pase of how MC romances Marvel girls it's too slow - no progress with Jean, no Black Cat, no Sue or Shehulk and so on. Also, gacha has no one from Marvel universe, so no option for this in a near future. But checking other fanfics, can confirm that this pacing is great, it feels nature and believable. IMHO

SawSomeSh!t

Sheeesh, OK Alright. Can relate to Hector's thoughts. Not sure about Rouge, but Jean and Sue along with MJ usually a part of most horrible love geometry you can ever expected. Better save than sorry

KingSpy25i .

Thank you for the amazing chapter like always 🙏

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

Blod

Tftc

Астердис Авентил

I want to start with the good things, because that’s important. I really enjoy this story, I like your approach as an author, and I deeply respect the social metacommentary woven into your work. I’m from Kazakhstan myself, and seeing certain ideas through the eyes of someone my age but from a completely different cultural background has been a wonderful experience. And that’s exactly why it’s been painful for me to read the recent chapters. I understand the excitement of other readers, but to be honest, the main character now feels weak—almost pitiful—on a moral level. It’s been, what, around a hundred chapters already? And he’s only formed relationships with girls who are completely under his control. He can build any illusion he wants, but the gacha girls are absolutely safe—their loyalty is guaranteed by the system. He can move fast or take things slow; it doesn’t matter, because they all depend on him completely. The One Piece world arc is basically a vacation romance. The only relationship that actually carries any risk for Hector is with Mary Jane—and she’s been absent from most of the story. Her appearances were great, but once she dropped out of focus, she turned into a function, not a person. All the other relationships are sterile and safe. He refuses to open up to anyone in any meaningful way. From a genuinely compelling protagonist, he’s turning into a manipulator simply playing around in his sandbox. Sure, he does it kindly, he takes care of his “toys,” but he doesn’t recognize anyone as even remotely his equal—not in power, but as a person. The MC faces no real danger. He has no enemies who can truly hurt him, no friends or loved ones he can actually trust. He’s in total control and can prevent or undo any harm. There’s room for interesting personal drama, but even that goes nowhere—like I said, the gacha girls are completely dependent on him and thus completely safe. At this point, the MC has become a full-on Mary Sue, not because he’s omnipotent, but because he’s trapped in a world where he’s an untouchable god. Showing an external threat to him is difficult, since Marvel’s power scaling is absurd: he either completely overwhelms his opponent or is utterly helpless. That’s why stories about overpowered characters usually explore their inner struggles—but Hector, after a few growth moments early on, has been stagnating for dozens of chapters now. It’s getting genuinely hard to read. I hope my comment helps you notice the weak points rather than comes across as hate. I truly love this story—and that’s why it hurts to see it like this. And no, I’m not saying he should have accepted Rogue’s offer. That was a reasonable choice. It’s just the overall trend that feels disheartening.

Matheus Alves Celestino

Or Avatar the navii one

kassiano lisboa

Brother acabei de ler toda a Wiki dessa Satana, ela tem o olhar da penitência! Se é locco não compensa!

Matheus Alves Celestino

Yes, that's something to think about. Like, I was sad that he didn't get Tsunade. But he can still go to that universe, he can even get Kaguya... okay, now I want to see him get Kaguya.

Matheus Alves Celestino

Evans, first of all. Please read, don't stop halfway through, please. Okay, I remember you wrote that you didn't know what you'd get for people who paid above a certain price. You're even considering a Discord (by the way, i was making one,but I don't know how to use Discord and I'm procrastinating.) Anyway. One idea, just hear me out. And yeah, I know it must be a bit annoying because of what I'm doing, but come on, you don't reply to comments and you don't like, how do I know you're reading this!!? Anyway. Do a vote for extras. Like once a month or every two months, you do a poll and include two or more universes that aren't important to the plot, like The Incredibles, or for example, a series, like The Simpsons!? Why not? Or better yet, Vikings, Game of Thrones, and so on. Put those names there and let us vote. Like I said, do this once a month or every two months. And you choose the universes for the vote. What do you think? I'm suggesting this idea mainly because of that side book and the Komi-san extras, which are incredible... and also because I'm paying 61 reais here, this shit has tax!!! What the fuck!!! Anyway, I don't know if you're going to read this. As I said, Mr. Level 99 Introvert, you don't like or comment, so I can't tell if you're reading this or not. Come on, give me an answer, at least tell me if it's a good idea or if it's unfeasible. And what about all of you that read this, what you think?

Matheus Alves Celestino

First of all this. ("You can't get mad for the results of your choices," Nemesis says, head appearing from his chest. "And you should have just...") seems to be cut, take a look, Evans. Okay, about the chapter itself: I'd like to scream, shout, and kick like a child for not French-kissing Rogue... but at the same time, I can't help but respect Hector for his choice; it was mature, true. That's why we pay for this story! It's worth what we pay; it's good, truly a story with life and development. And besides... let's be honest, Jean already knows; she may not have heard, but the moment Rogue considered not saying anything to the girls, Jean saw her mind. You can say she was with Nen, that this would be preventing the mind reading, but she wasn't in the right frame of mind to concentrate. If I'm not mistaken! In the future Hector saw about Jean, he saw her on the space station, performing acts libidinous (He's talking about sex, Batman!) and then, the Phoenix. So, before the apocalypse, there's a chance of that happening, especially considering that Jean, through Rogue, knows about the Harem, has had time to think, and isn't very connected to the Institute. After all, I'm sure he's already thought Xavier did something to prevent her fake love for Scott from happening. The question would be... what else is a lie? Moving on to others (I'm still rooting for Ororo. By the way, did Hector leave Virgil's background card as Ororo's distant relative? It would make sense. Something similar to how Gacha put Shego as a relative of the woman in green and Hydra.) Susan. My friend, I think she's the most obvious of all. I have no idea how much the internet must be flooded with ships right now. It's one thing to make a nonsensical mess, or feelings, but another to see the woman completely interested! By the way, more slice of life, damn it!! I still remember Mary Jane trying to set up the Hector, he's the one holding her (hehehe), so let's go!! And now the Gacha... I'm not surprised Nemesis is interested, come on, she's linked to a handsome, strong, confident guy, with the bearing and walk of a king! She fell in love with Yuki Rito and he absorbed the guy! Besides, a lot of names came up, if I'm not mistaken Ameli is the Widowmaker, it would make sense, she's the most likely to """"betray"""" in many quotes, Hector. I totally vote for Chun Li!!!! And Tatsumaki takes her to hell too to kill demons and let her let off steam, damn it!!!

CosmicStardust25

Great chapter, even if this Rogue doesnt end up as his lover, there are infinite Rogues out there, dream bigger fellas.

Samuel Famakinwa

Lmao that ending

Deimon97

Gacha need: Chick Hat (Metal Gear Solid V: The Phantom Pain)

Михаил Громов

How beautiful everything is! The end made me laugh a lot)

SomeXeros

Thanks for the chapter.

kassiano lisboa

Bom dia galera!

Matheus Alves Celestino

Who as it!


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