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(Early Release)Fallen Hero Karin Last War (Afterstory- First Part)
🕑 Added 2024-01-12 10:45:43 +0000 UTCUpdate: 13/01/2024 -> Updated for better readability
Now, as Valkyria, Karin works as an enforcer for Sylvian, completing various missions that benefit her goddess's will. These missions are usually briefed to her by multiple Sylvian Captains. But for her next mission, the captain is a very well-known familiar face...
Hope you enjoy it!
Anyways, feel free to leave any feedback in the comments. If you spot any grammatical errors or other odd stuff, just mention it, and I can always fix it :)
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Comments
FineForestry
Looks much better!
Alexus Magnus IV
Hello, guys! Updated Valkyria Text to improve readability. To be honest, I don't want to change the font for story reasons, but I made some smart decisions that I think improved the readability. Also, gave it the final version treatment by adding connections between them, because why not xD
Alexus Magnus IV
Now that you said it, I looked using my phone, and you are right! Changing fonts is easy, so I will look into it during the weekend and try to improve readability! I will comment here something when I update the folder!
FineForestry
The Valkyria font is a bit difficult to read easily at full zoom out while in fullscreen on a 24" monitor. Like the letters have very little spacing between other letters and in their own dead space (A,E,H,W,G,V,N,M). I'm not sure if changing it for the remainder of this comic would be weird for continuity, but I'd definitely recommend modifying it or using a different font in the future.
