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The Age of Chaos Ch. 4 (Original Fantasy)

🕑 Added 2025-02-13 23:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

hehe yep, Oren just had to play long enough to see every card at least once, and from that moment on he could recognize them from any angle on either side~

Alun Lewis

Figured pretty early into the chapter that Oren had to be counting cards, and smartly losing hands at a rate that felt plausible...but I figured it was just statistics and math. Never contemplated that the sensory buffs you can get in RPGs could be applied to memorizing the the cards via unique or even limited re-occurrence imperfections. Would have made games of Caravan or Gwent easier to win in Fallout: New Vegas and The Witcher, if that has been options with high enough perception skills 😉

Cambrian

Hehe yep, definitely a big plot point! And happy to hear you're liking the story so far!

Cambrian

Good catch, fixt

Touch

Edit quit while your behind you’re behind

WildMartin

Just read these first 4 chapters, excellent start to this story. You have me curious about who summoned him and why they set him against the gods but I imagine that will get revealed a little at a time.

daniel riggle

Haaahaaa haaa! Nice

Cambrian

exactly. vague is better than specifically wrong i feel lol

TheSinful

Best way when you don't know shit is to be vague as hell. There's a reason that I denote someone speaking another language rather than trying to write it. Or have two characters free climbing for fun and focus on their conversation rather than their actions, since I don't know how that works and research didn't help much.

TheSinful

It's like saying Michael Jordan has a basketball problem

Cambrian

heh maybe it will, maybe it won't :P we'll have to wait and see~

Cambrian

Hah, I'm happy you noticed that. TBH, original version of the outline did just have Oren straight up wagering Sophia while knowing he couldn't lose anyways so it didn't matter. But then while I was writing, I felt like his guilt wouldn't let him take the easy route if he thought he had another option

SpectralTime

It was a reasonable fix for not knowing cards. …That said, I’m sure Sophia using some of her power won’t come back to bite them in the ass or anything.

TheFirstSword

I like how you're playing with the usual tropes for these situations. We know that Sophia is going to end up getting wagered in the hand, but Oren doesn't just jump straight to that even though he knows it's a sure thing (wager and result wise). His choices all come off as him trying to get through things with the least conflict or moral "shortcuts" which is a nice take.

Cambrian

so far!

Cambrian

Hah maybe! :P

Cambrian

Potentially~

Cambrian

Yeah he's a bit super human :P

Cambrian

Gentleman Grays: "DAMN STRAIGHT!"

Cambrian

lol true

Sith2go

Its only a gambling problem, if you loose.

KnightofMor

They are so going to get jumped outside of town. Gentleman Grays is going to bring help too! Cause he knows some fuckery went down for them all to just allow the pair to LEAVE with all the Winnings!

jp9901

So far he has excellent vision and superior strength

anony

No way we see the last of them. Sophia used a bit of her divinity to deescalate things. Sharp-eared god hunters could hear of the event and be suspicious enough to press more details and become convinced a god passed through.

J

Very good chapter, nice setup for a local antagonist(I’m guessing)

Caleb S

I think we all knew what was coming, but kind of surprised they got out (so far) without violence


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