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The Age of Chaos Ch. 5 (Original Fantasy)

🕑 Added 2025-02-14 23:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Yep, you're right on that last bit. Thanks for pointing out that mistake for me!

Alun Lewis

Hmmm...Grays got bumped off double-quick by the mystery figure. And easily...another surviving higher deity? One of the mortal deities who has decided that ensuring Sophia and her ilk are ALL gone? Or are we eventually going to see an Otherworlder vs. Otherworlder fight between Oren and Shad O Man? Questions, questions! Oh...and early in the chapter, when you have Oren thinking about his plans, you have him "note" that escorting Sophia to her refuge is part of HER penance...but do you mean HIS penance?

DarkflameDemon

Right?

Cambrian

Its half from Sophia's perspective :P

Sith2go

"Making a Tsundere" would be the name of this story if it was from Sophia's perspective

Cambrian

yus

TheSinful

Grays: "Obviously, I, as a man kinda running a small town in bumfuck nowhere, am going to be the Disk 1 Final Boss." Shad O. Man: "Who the fuck is this guy?"

Cambrian

lmaaaao

Cambrian

Happy to hear that, I'm excited to see what you all think going forwarD!

Cambrian

Yeah Oren's got a lot of guilt going on, he's gonna have to confront that eventually but for now its kind of funny seeing his and Sophia's motivations basically ramming into each other more and more

Cambrian

Heh yep~

Cambrian

I should probably admit that in the current outline, there's no seggs until Chapter 44 at the earliest :v

Caleb S

Sorry Oren but she seems to have a thing for bad boys with a soft side and tragic back story.

Zac Chalmers

Cool world you’re setting up. Really interested to see where this all goes.

SpectralTime

I personally am not a big fan of that whole "Japanese martyrdom complex, manipulating everyone else to hate me while I suffer on the inside" thing, so I enjoyed it backfiring on Oren constantly. (And, okay, while I don't like the manipulation, I at least understand where he's coming from.) I did *not* expect Mister Black to just flat out kill everyone though. That certainly raises some questions, including whether or not he's fully antagonistic to Sophia. It could be read as covering her and Oren's tracks, although that could just as easily be not wanting to share the prize with anyone else. We'll have to see.

anony

Another great chapter! I knew Grays talking about the feats of the two would draw attention.

Touch

Wdym it’s already been 5 chapters and no segg😔


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