Rocktrolled Fungirls #10
🕑 Added 2021-06-02 19:22:56 +0000 UTCHere's a story: after working on this page for a long time and finishing in the late evening I exported it and put it in my storyboard finished as a miniature to see if it fits the other pages well. Then I realized there's a pretty big error in it.
I hope to get back to it later and fix it, but I just can't do it tonight or this weekend.
If you don't see it- the border dividing lower two frames is at such an angle, that it's lining up EXACTLY with Amanita's stomach and Aldona's ass in the first frame.
It's not a terrible mistake, but I'd rather get rid of it later by changing the angle of the border (but that requires some redrawing to do properly).
Comments
Paqs
Aldona and Nissa are my two favs <3
CrazyLace
I like how Amanita is going with the flow. Nissa is getting some quality gropes in there
The14th
Obviously I don't know enough about comic layouts 'cus I don't know why that's a problem.
Daniel S
Is that a problem? I wouldn't have noticed it unless it was pointed out to me, and I still don't understand the significance
Paqs
I still don't see it...
Jeremy
Ugh. I hate making/fixing accidental tangents/parallels like this. Not sure I would have noticed without you pointing it out, AND I don’t think it detracts in any way, but I understand you being unhappy with the composition.
ProfessorE
Dont stress yourself too much over little mistakes brother.
Beredore2
Honestly, it's kind of a cool effect