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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 57 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2024-11-20 16:24:53 +0000 UTC

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JRC

I imagine Fleur's going to want some answers, I suppose it's convenient Harry never promised Apolline anything concrete in terms of Fleur. Technically, Harry can handle this any way he wants without breaking a promise.

Cambrian

Oops

Captain Hair

Wow, I was rereading the story and I just came across something. This chapter completely contradicts chapter 35. Harry was adamant to himself that he was never going to give up Bellatrix for Amelia, and yet, he's making that offer right now.

NOPE YOU DON'T KNOW MY NAME

Moderately weird take, Present Bella has all the memories of future bella lmao

Seaver IXp

Agreed. Bella is truly his most loyal. I'd take the psycho over minister of magic any day. Would Amelia ever think of offing Bella if Bella dominates the sub Amelia?

Osiris Sundavr

Coming a little bit out of left field here but; Cambrian! Where our Lovegood at? This story isn’t complete without the Luna!

Osiris Sundavr

Agreed, we must keep our loyal Hound. She is our attack dog in the shadows. Plus we can’t have the black sister trio if Bella is gone or dead.

Osiris Sundavr

Ducking probably lol

Gamesempie

She has soooooo many questions and is soooooo horny right now.

Captain Hair

Teenage Rebellion Ho!!!

Colin Peden

A bonded Amelia, followed by a Horny, on the offensive Fleur. Would she try to have hate sex with him? Due to him binding her mother and her mother saying she doesn't get to be bound to him?

Colin Peden

I hope you someday remember what fic that was in, because that sounds interesting.

Colin Peden

Sonyou are saying that someone who had their entire self replaced by a future version, said future version being the very person responsible for the death of the only person you had who was family, makes her not be the killer of said family member? The Bella in this story has all her memories from everything that originally happened in the Potterverse, to include the murder of Sirius Black. And the cucurrent Harry is the same, has the memmemories of the original Potterverse, to include watching Bella kill Sirius. How exactly do you propose that Harry is not fit to lead for being unable to operate the future Bella, that he brought with him, from the current Bella, if they are the SAME person? You need to reread the whole story and pay attention to the fact that alt!fut!Bella is the present!Bella

Josh N

angry HORNY veela time

Laughing_Turtle

They're literally the same person, though. Past Bella was essentially murdered and replaced by future Bella when Harry shoved her memories in there. Also, past Bella was still a multiple murderer who tortured the Longbottoms to insanity, so it's not unreasonable for him to be willing to dispose of her for a loyal Minister of Magic.

redhawktiger

Enter Fleur angrily demanding Harry bind her lol

Hadrian v.E.

Well, thanks for showing that Harry isn't fit to lead. Despite knowing present!Bella hasn't harmed Sirius, whom it seems he rather be fucking, he admits he can't separate her from alt!fut!Bella, proving he has the mental discipline of a child.

Nanaya7Nights

I don't recall which fic I read it in, but one story had Ginny become that as a result of the remnants Tom's memories and obsession combining with Ginny's own crush.

Nanaya7Nights

Alternate PoV FTW! Also we need a full Harry/Amelia scene. Maybe they can have a celebration when she gets elected followed by a threesome with Rita (to reward her for her help)? The threesome can be after an exclusive interview post her election.

Nat

I'd like a susan PoV some time. What her thoughts are on harry publicly endorsing her aunt and her feelings in general

Rotaugur

I mean you are right, and i can see it more for fleur to be a lighter version of bella for him, is would be more fitting for her to become his pet veela/bodyguard in public, and while hermione is as amorale as bella even in canon, she is more in his future research team, whereas bella is an attackdog,he can sick on his political enemies in the shaddows.

jp9901

Angry Veela Time!!!

Rotaugur

I amsad to see,that you jumpt over amelias binding, but can understant it fromthe point of an author. Maybe have anotherof harrys women( aurora maybe) ask him to show it to her,and give us the scene in that way , later down the line? Fleur must be desperate, to reach out to harry in that way. Would it be more in her character to demand from him to bind her , to challange him in a contest of sex, wich she knows she will lose, and the winner belongs to the loser, or will she beg to be bound to him?

Phraxius

He can't get rid of Bella, every totally-not-a-Dark Lord needs a pet psychopath!


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