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The Age of Chaos Ch. 2 (Original Fantasy)

🕑 Added 2025-02-11 23:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Bob

Sooooo not a revenge novel, jusf a summoned guy doing what he was told.... or is it? On to the next one

Cambrian

Heh an interesting hypothesis. I will confirm that the refuge DOES exist, but I won't deny that Sophia might have ulterior motives... or develop them soon anyways~

Alun Lewis

I wonder if Sophia's refuge even exists...her behaviour when questioned on it seemed to be too sketchy to be simply underselling the distance they'd have to travel. Like she wants Oren to be her permanent bodyguard and is hoping that he'll just adapt to being the role if they wander for a couple of weeks. I also wonder why Oren noted that he understands the reason why Sophia doesn't look like the figure he spared during his massacre of her family. Is the appearance change something she did - which flies in the face of Oren having to explain why the God Hunters can find her so easily - or was it done as a last act by her father before he was slain by Oren?

Just_Call_Me_Steve

A pike is essentially a modified spear. Though they could have been using Pike fish as weapons, you never know.

travis btmb

And yet you said some of them had pikes I for one would not be running around dense woodland with a pike a spear maybe but not a pike

travis btmb

Tftc

Maxime ikutei

Thanks its good

Cambrian

Heya! You need to go into Settings and then under the "More" drop down menu you're looking for "Connected Apps" and from there you can connect your Discord to your Patreon account. At which point Patreon should automatically pull you into my Discord and assign you the correct role based on your pledge to my Patreon Page.

Maxime ikutei

Hello where i can found the link of the discord ?

Cambrian

That's certainly one of the questions to be answered!

anony

Interesting, very interesting. Is there a particular reason mortals decided to kill the divinity, or why Oren went along with it at first?

Cambrian

Hah, admittedly I think both Oren and Sophia are less extreme than those examples, but I don't mind the comparison :P

Cambrian

Nice! Happy to still have ya for the time being heh

Cambrian

Yeah in this case they may have had horses at one point, and Sophia ran into a heavily forested area specifically to try to lose them by forcing them on foot. admittedly I just didn't think about horses this early, so I'm coming up with in-universe explanations on the fly. Still, I think the woods being impassable on horseback works well enough xP

jp9901

As I read, all I can imagine is Kratos from GOW Ragnorok begrudgingly working with Aqua from Konosuba

Sith2go

Fair enough, i just always imagine lynching squads ride on horseback.

SpectralTime

I did think that Oren is pretty good at guessing what people will do on the "able to make mistakes" front, but it fits with the whole "infinite potential" thing and, again, him being a burnt-out, world-weary guy instead of a smug or cynical manipulator does a lot to make it go down easy. And as you say, a lot of mysteries still to be answered, so who knows who or what Oren *used* to be? I guess as someone who was considering dropping my subscription this month, this story pulled me back in, is my overall point.

Cambrian

Nice. Hope I can keep that going. Sympathetic and likable but still capable of mistakes/bad calls is the line I'm trying to walk with both Oren and Sophia, we'll see if I can manage it heh

SpectralTime

It’s a good intro and, as someone who’s none too fond of LitRPG elements I really appreciate your not quite using them. Also, I like the tired, world weary protagonist who’s not a petty asshole, and the lady protagonist who’s got a bit of depth to her while still coming across as a mostly innocent victim. They are both likable without being perfect.

Cambrian

The God Hunters weren't on horses when they and Sophia ran into Oren, the woods were too thick for horseback

Sith2go

What happened to the god hunters's horses? Did Oren and Sophia take a pair for the trip or did the horses just run off with corpses still hanging on their saddles?


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