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Vibe Check: Silver Eyes
🕑 Added 2025-09-02 17:36:42 +0000 UTCSo time to come clean, the Silver Eyes story has honestly been giving me trouble for months now. I'm just kind of spinning my wheels at this point and admittedly don't quite know where to take it.
The whole concept started as "what if the MC found himself in a breeding program to repopulate Silver Eyed Warriors" but ultimately I dunno if that concept really has legs beyond Cole fucking another MILF character every other week.
Trying to avoid Sunk Cost Fallacy here, so I'm polling you guys to find out if its just me or if I'm right that this story is kind of just... eh.
I probably wouldn't end this story immediately to be clear, but depending on the results of this polling, I might look into sunsetting it in the next couple of chapters.
Comments
Chainsword83
Honestly, if you wanted to take this slot and update Invader Syndrome twice a week, I'd be stoked. I know it's probably not practical, just saying. XD
Kyo Amamoto
this one honestly never caught my interest cam. soory.
Aaron Hardin
This story seemed to suffer from trying to make both the plot and the porn the primary story drivers. Your stories work better if one of those is driving but the other is a frequent tag along, so either you needed to stop making every plot point lead to sex instead of other action, or stop trying to make a coherent plot and just accept that the story should be made of sex scenes with everything in between skipped over,.
Shadowfox
It really was just kind of a meh story after a while. Basically the same sex scene with *insert milf here* but no real story advancement because impregnating women was the point of the story.
Oppilif
Are you going to change it with another rwby story?
![カネコツ[kanesys] from fanbox](https://patrefans.com/kistorage/20926.jpg)
