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minor update

🕑 Added 2021-12-09 15:19:42 +0000 UTC
minor update

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Erin Han

yeah, im glad to be able to focus on that next

Hoss Bonaventure

The picnic scene is paced okay imo. Probably even better after your tweaks. A longer set of scenes back at the castle would be cool eventually, though.

Erin Han

Open to suggestions. How do you mean slower? Btw I will be tweaking the timings. Thus far, all paths have been bound to having the same number of messages, which made it a bit harder to make natural dialog, but I've recently added in a way to give all the paths variable numbers of messages, so that will help with making things more natural.

Code Breaker

I gather that in 1.0 the picnic scene will be slower and more natural? This beta is just to set the scene

Erin Han

Its ok, she will become a lot more cruel, but it will be after her love goes way down. Can't have her personality change too suddenly or it doesn't feel earned

Code Breaker

After getting all four versions i can say so far the writing is pretty good! however i was partially hoping for the "evil" route (if you ignore her up until the message option to say "he just wants sex") to have the princess say something like "good, he deserves it for treating me so nice" or somehting equally bitchy

Code Breaker

The game get unplayably laggy very quickly after bowser arrives. Hoping for a quick fix soon

dale

the game starts to lag then crash this seems like a memory leak issue.

Logan

I'm not sure if this is just on my end, but after playing this version for a few minutes it begins to slow down and lag.

Code Breaker

Not to worry! I was more gonna comment on the writing and themes! See whats fresh or what could be improved on! I wont be too harsh on things like grammar or spelling just more WHAT is being written aboutz (like if the ntr content makes sense) keep up the awesome work! Will leave the review soon <3

Erin Han

Thank you! Not too much new content this time though

Code Breaker

Just when i thought my evening would be boring! Ill give a more in depth opinion once i get home from work! Cannot wait to test this


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