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Love Addict’s RPG Vol. 2 Ch 86

🕑 Added 2024-10-26 02:47:02 +0000 UTC

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Spatula

Perfect comeback after the forced hiatus!

PunishedKom

I mean I’m not gonna turn down free praise if you wanna keep going lmao

PunishedKom

You might not’ve noticed because I do it fairly subtly in most cases and I still withhold a ton of information when we do get glimpses of their thoughts haha

Adrian Chapman

Huh… maybe I should read more carefully then :)

HN

I was gonna write a long reply, but then I come here and it's already written. Agree 100%.

PunishedKom

I’m not selling myself short, I’m quite happy with 5000 words of two characters talking on a couch lmao. I just joke since that’s been almost the whole volume. Focusing on a NEET type character has that drawback. If anything my only concern is people expecting more action after the boxing match when that was more of an event thing, and there really won’t be another big event thing in this volume to match it. But I do think most people understand that’s not what this series is about.

PunishedKom

Pretty much every chapter is in 3rd person omniscient but thank you lol

jeffrey bragg jr

i love it and don’t sell yourself short i think that the chapters with stuff happening and them having fun and even him working are great but i find i am laughing and enjoying the conversations and banter more in these plot building/ single location chapters. i don’t know why exactly i find these so great but i don’t think i am alone in saying that no chapter is boring and it’s definitely worth the wait weather it’s a heart event, work, smut or world building chapter; no matter how short or long that wait is. so keep up the great work and i know i say it alot but remember to take care of yourself bc the work you do brings happiness and joy to us all. 🙂👍🏻

Adrian Chapman

Great chapter. Love the subtle shift to third person omniscient!

PunishedKom

Pressure building and building until something goes pop…

PunishedKom

That was my intention with a lot of the changes from my outline, making her look better and showing how bad she actually feels about upsetting the few people she cares about. It also doesn’t shy away from her weaknesses. All in all I’m very happy with her progression so far and I’m excited to continue it!

Michael Spriggs

I think one of the reasons I think this chapter is so amazing is because It really makes empathize even more with Zoe. There are other reasons to, but this chapter really makes me feel for her.

Maelstrom148

Another outstanding chapter as always. Love the little bits building up here.


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