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The Rival: Part 8

🕑 Added 2025-11-09 01:29:43 +0000 UTC

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morphtavist

Not sure I want either Lucinda or Dr Collins controlling the other. I like to think of them both as unstoppable goddess-like manipulators that can't hurt each other directly, but ruthlessly manipulate every other character (especially me!!!) to do the dirty work of fighting their war.

Michael Schroeder

I love what a devoted servant Professor Williams is. So deeply programmed, loyal to Dr. Collins even now

aelfstone

Nothing is certain in Presley's World, but I am cautiously optimistic that Dr. Collins will regain her dominant power and put Lucinda back under her control. That being said, I'd love to see Lucinda become one of Dr. Collins' disciples of strong hypnotherapy and open a practice of her own. Los Angeles is a big place, after all, so the more hypnotherapists, the better!

L

Exactly, we need part 9 asap

GeminiFantasy86

I am so glad that Professor Williams came to Dr Collins' rescue. I knew that somewhere deep inside her, the true Dr Collins would rise from Lucinda's hypnosis.

BlueBear3221

So glad to see Professor Williams help out Dr. Collins and I'm definitely looking forward to Dr. Collins next visit to Lucinda.

Tom Boston

Can't wait to see more of Lucinda plan come to fruition

David

Awesome! I knew Professor Williams would find a way to help Dr Collins or at least I had hoped she would. Still Petra lurks and we don't know her story. I get the feeling once Dr Collins is restored and Lucinda broken and banished there may be a final showdown? Sleep Dr Collins, rest and restore.