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Careful when you want to paint a softer picture!
🕑 Added 2022-11-27 10:00:18 +0000 UTC
In this article, we will critique and correct the illustrations submitted through the KawaiiSensei official line!
---------------Comments we have received---------------
The part I want corrected is that the body is stiff.
The part we are having trouble with is that there is no sense of unity with the background.
As a result, the background becomes monochromatic.
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So, I'll focus on [tips to make the body and pose look softer]!
First, the good parts and the parts that bothered me
Nice illustration, with well thought out posing and character design!
It doesn't look stiff at all as is, but let's figure out how to add a little more movement!
・Picture Corrections
★ I tilted my head to match the expression and emotion.
★I made the face slanted, so I made it "flow" accordingly.
★I added a tail to make it look more wolf-like.
・Put the parts on and clean up the drawing.
★Carnivores have their eyes close together, while herbivores have their eyes far apart.
★The body is twisted, so the clothes are wrinkled in the direction of the twist.
★If you can express the "mountain" on the back of the hand, it will look more three-dimensional, so be conscious of it!
・About Background
Since the pattern is simple, simple shapes such as dots would look great on the background!
You may want to try applying brushes like clouds or light on top of a solid coat of paint.
There are a variety of free pattern materials available, so please try them out!
・About color selection (extra)
This is the color circle of a Clip Studio Paint.
The right side is more saturated, and the upper side is lighter.
Colors with high saturation and lightness tend to stand out and are difficult to handle.
When used in the background, they tend to bury the characters, so if in doubt, avoid these colors and try something else!
