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July Update + WIP/Spoiler Doc!

🕑 Added 2023-07-01 17:55:14 +0000 UTC

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Drogune

Thank you for the feedback and support!

Healnavi

This reads a lot better than the first draft if each scene is meant to be somewhere around three to six pages. Love the characters and their dynamics, but old version seemed stuck on the stuff around them instead of the group. Really looking forward to next version of the story. Thanks for sharing this!


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