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Ezekiel's Story
🕑 Added 2020-10-01 12:09:26 +0000 UTCYikes here we go. Some info on the story:
Genre: Contemporary / General Fiction
Word Count: 8,126 words
The Story of The Story:
So I recently found this short story on my old hard drive, it's the first short story I ever wrote. Something like six years ago. I've always loved this little story, it's about a father and son that get separated, and find their way back to each other, but it isn't easy. It's always been meaningful to me, but it was also VERY difficult for me to revise this month. I did my best to maintain the story as it first was while cleaning up the writing to make it a little less... well bad. But I also wanted to maintain my old writing style - which was hard because I'm a really different writer now. Anyway, I thought it'd be symbolic to start sharing my work with the start of my work. Okay, story is attached (sorry it's a Novelette now, it needed an extra scene)
A Note:
Just a reminder that I am still pretty new at writing. I took a three year break and am only just now back at it. I'm in no way a talented writer (yet, hopefully) but I am excited to practice and get better. Feedback is welcome but not required. I hope you enjoy reading stories where I practice. They'll likely never be published lol
Oh yeah, I thought it would be fun to write Patrons into each of my stories. I decided to start with the first people that signed up for this tier (lightning fast you guys are). Zach and Udy are in this story. Slagathor will be in Mermaids.
There's also a channel just for this tier where you guys can chat about the story if you want. The channel is called Merph's Writing. It's over on the discord. Have fun!
Oh! I forgot! Songs I listened to while writing:
Ezekiel's sections: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58TBZnvyGwQ
John's sections: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AwIF_BdOmIY
Comments
Merphy Napier
Feedback is vey much encoraged! I want to get better so learning what's missing and what can be improved upon is helpful to me :). Feel free to DM me or to go to #merphs-writing on the discord if you'd like!
