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Death Becomes You 466
🕑 Added 2025-08-11 18:40:24 +0000 UTCi tried 2 b bold with the formatting on this one and it was a lil too ambitious (no constructive critique plz ill fix it when my brain's working better thnzzzz)
Comments
D'Artagnan Wayland
Such a sweet walk and talk
Shinju
I like the pretty tones on this page :0
Jennifer Lee
This makes me hope gwen and kalan get a little more time together soon. Its been a long time for them and kalans the kind of guy to get really emotional about missing someone i bet
Milady Moody
I started reading the comments after I read the comic and had not read the description. So I read it just fine.
Priestess.of.Pleasure
I love this formatting, the speech bubbles make it obvious that they are moving along the path in the long panel on the left. It’s cool and informative
rasvimhia
I love the mooooons
C
I think its cool
wolfywox
I think the formatting is fine! Since you color code the speech bubbles by character, it's going to be easy to follow, even in webtoons' format.
_Pogona_
ILOVEIT😩
Dmars
I loved the layout on this one I found it really easy to follow❤️
Kate Alvarez Anderson
It's so pretty... I like this layout creativity very much, but I can see how if you are trying to work out how to break it down for the webtoons scrolling format it might be giving you a headache. I just love the way their speech bubbles meander down the path as they do.
Grægori
My sweet boy. I'll protect you. I appreciate the slow burn immensely.
Fox
How about constructive compliments? Because this looks really good to me!
legut
feral rodent XDDD
A Demon (Subtle)
Acting as if her brain didnt completely explode when when she realized she fondled a demi-god for the first time hehe
Stefani Nunya
I really like the way this one flows actually. I honestly don't think it needs fixing at all.
Oli Platt
I'm loving the visual flow of the dialog!!
Aurora77106
Format is great! Color coding works out perfectly
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
"It's not serious he just ticks all the boxes and I wanna keep banging him indefinitely"
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gwen pretending like it’s not Serious™️ but leaving aleksei a five star yelp review…. I see you girl
PlantQueen
I like the format
Alex
Kalan, intimidating yes, but you still want him
Kitsune Ana
Honestly, i am so used to the gwennifer nicknames that i thought Gwendolyn was another one of them lol
ramoth
But I will say the background with the moons is GORGEOUS 😍
ramoth
I can't get over the feral rodent comment 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
CrazyCryptid
Critique? I see nothing to Critique, this looks amazing!! 😍
Ruby_Solstice27
Kalan…read the room honey
