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Chapter 122 - Minion

🕑 Added 2022-05-31 23:46:43 +0000 UTC

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Moonspike

Might wanna have another look at that section.

Moonspike

He turned back, searching the empty woodland. The trees with thick and full of pine needs here, the ground before him thick with brush and deadwood.

Alex Maher

It should have been "Oh shit." I think my brain broke :D

Alex Maher

Fixed them, thanks!

Akki

Is it meant to be "Ow Shit" or "Oh Shit"?

Eyke

Also, there's an unnecessary quotation mark in the penultimate paragraph after "Dylan said."

Eyke

Spelling: "mad night" --> "mad knight", "very series" --> "very serious"


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