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Chapter 145 - Red Night

🕑 Added 2022-09-04 20:59:44 +0000 UTC

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good guy

I loved this one. Always exciting when the MC gets a new skill. 🎉🔥

Notcreepycreeper

Nah, it has gandalf vibes. Sometimes something being a bit over the top is good. Amd Hump earned the right to be a bit dramatic with the Gorger.

Tyson Roy

I feel the part where he breaks the chains has too much to it and makes it feel cheesy. The part where he outright says “I have broken your chains before.” and "I will do so again" feels like a play/show or a comic book. You could just say he has a fierce and determined look in his eyes have the scene play out and let the reader come to their own conclusion that he refuses to kneel. overall still a great chapter I'm happy your showing him dealing with his trauma as some authors just make their character shrug off any traumatic events like its nothing or minimizing it as just a quick vomiting and move on.

Alex Maher

I made a large change to this chapter that I think made it much cooler. This will only effect those of you that read it within 2 hours of uploading. I recommend you go back and read from when the gorger attacks Hump again so that you don't miss out.


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