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Chapter 33 - River and Waves

🕑 Added 2021-06-29 09:52:13 +0000 UTC

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Alex Maher

Thanks for the feedback! In terms of development, one of the things I plan to do for the final draft is add a book extract at the beginning of every chapter. Bit of a shame I didn't have that idea ready before I started publishing :D Not going to give anything away, but I hope you like the direction I take his spellbook.

Mislandor

I thought it was pretty clear - the book is semi-aware - it shakes when it has something relevant to his situation or to teach him, as he is ready for the information. I do like the fact that the book has more than just spells it in - it has the notes and thoughts of the line of wizards before him - gives it a sense of history - I would love to see the book get developed a bit further - perhaps gain a familiar type role?

Alex Maher

Correct. The book only reveals pages when it deems him ready for them. This is supposed to be something already established by this point. From your comment, I'm guessing I may need to make that a bit more clear :D

Oliverthms

So he can't see the entire book?


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