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Chapter 45 - Decisions for the Future

🕑 Added 2021-08-10 16:29:45 +0000 UTC

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Alex Maher

Bud saw Vamir's scales in the cavern and asked about it during the time that Hump was unconscious. I know this is a bit awkward as it's not on screen, but I didn't see a way around it. Let me know if you think it needs a proper moment of mention and I'll edit it in.

Gardor

Did Vamir and Celaine tell Bud they were dragon people, or is this the first time he's hearing about it?

Alex Maher

Fixed that one too!

Jason Hornbuckle

"“That’s healing magic for you,” Hump said. “It can hold a break in place and mend much of the damage, but most relies on the body’s own ability to heal to stitch itself back together.”" 'but most' I guess should be 'but mostly'?

Alex Maher

Fixed it, thanks :)

Jason Hornbuckle

"He couldn’t help but smile at the sound of familiar. Bud, Celaine, and Vamir." These are both sentence fragments


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