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Chapter 360 - The Demon Citadel

🕑 Added 2024-07-21 01:22:58 +0000 UTC

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johnathan reese

It's been a few days and I've had some time to think why I'm having a hard time connecting to the Alveron army. We see lots of wizards/practitioner and some very powerful chosen but not a lot of the common man soilders in the spotlight. As the group gets more and more powerful I hope the average man and their capabilities doesn't get loss in the sauce.

johnathan reese

One thing I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around is the size of the alveron army. It feels like a lot of people came out of nowhere since Fort. Nordic. Also how does the adventurer party system work with the military of Alveron? Are adventurers left autonomous or do they take commands from generals or captains?

George R

Awesome chapter

NameGame

That castle is clearly no gourmand. Didn't even salt them first! Thanks for the chapter.

Oldfaithful

As long as you are satisfied with the finished product. Don't feel like you need to rush your story for us that will only take away substance from the story.

Alex Maher

That was intentional actually. One of the main bits of feedback I've had over the previous books was Hump standing around not doing anything during action. I'm trying to speed up the pace a bit so it doesn't feel like I'm dwelling.

Oldfaithful

Epic as always, a bit more fast paced than usual but no complaints.

Rajeev Roy

Amazing wasn't expecting that level of defense


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