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Chapter 362 - Tunnel Training

🕑 Added 2024-07-26 01:52:30 +0000 UTC

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Pole Fire

This was great but with as fast passed as these chapters are I wouldn’t mind if the training and synchronizing was extended

NameGame

This is so good. I'm loving it. Even more than I love McDonald's. Which isn't that much, to be fair, but still. Thanks for the chapter!

George R

Thanks for the chapter

BRUNO ASTUR

If those chosen will not have a big impact/screen time in the coming chapters, then there is no need to expand on the training scene. On the other hand, if they will have, maybe it would be interesting to give them a little more screen time to help solidify their character .

Brinley Millender

i liked the summarized chapter but at the same time. i’m a sucker for details. more of the spell sculpting process would’ve been cool to read also. i’d like the expanded section but idk if now’s the time since they’re about to go into battle. the ending did feel abrupt or like it was too quick to end if that makes sense.

Rajeev Roy

Some minor typos but I think the expanded section would help the story the chapter also feels very abrupt.

Notcreepycreeper

I always like a longer chapter, but I didn't mind the summarized section. I want to get to the fun bits

Johan Fresk

I think the story would benefit from an expansion of the summarised section. In my humble opinion the chapter ending is a bit abrupt.

Diarmid McArdle

I kind of wish we could see more of the spell sculpting process I know there was just a chapter on that but it feels like there should be something more


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