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Chapter 283 - Red Heat

🕑 Added 2023-11-30 01:51:32 +0000 UTC

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Alex Maher

Sorry, only just seeing this now. And yeah, I agree. Patreon does the bare minimum and I have no idea why. Glad you liked the chapter! While I agree Hump lacks minor magics, he can light a candle at a glance (Spark). Bringing a cup to his hand would be more difficult. Feather Fall is more advanced magic in this world. Not that I disagree with what you're saying. I think incorporating fun cantrips is something I'll make a note of doing more of in Book 5. It's easy to let it slip when you're focusing on the other details, but this type of thing adds a lot of fun to books like Dresden Files. Thanks for the feedback :)

NameGame

This is a off topic, but I remember how you asked what people thought of the patreon update and I was pros and cons about it. I've changed my mind, it's mostly awful and I hate it. It's not that hard for a basic reading page to be an option. They put no effort into this garbage. This doesn't reflect on your writing, just the site layout. It occurs to me that Hump is lacking in minor magics, from daily stuff to wizarding utility staples. Lighting a candle with a glance, bringing a cup to his hand from across the room, and the old faithful of wizards everywhere: Feather Fall. He's pretty solid in a fight, but outside of it, the little things that make a wizard a bit odd or give him utility to do things most people can't like it's no big deal. Like jump off high stairs for a superhero landing. That chapter was phenomenal. The build up to the end, fantastic. ARGH I wish I was a few days late so the next chapter was already here. Loved seeing him call to the dragons and them respond.

Alex Maher

I... I don't plan on having everyone call him Ignarok. It's like his secret dragon name

Federico

Thank you! But please rethink "Ignarok", I really like "Hump" better!


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