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Chapter 325 - Window into Hell

🕑 Added 2024-03-20 02:29:03 +0000 UTC

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Jason Hornbuckle

"A man stared back at them. No, not quite a man. They had black wings and a tail. Its smouldering eyes studied them curiously." You've got some pronoun confusion here. If it's a man then he had black wings and a tail and his eyes studied them.

lenkite

Well, no idea why anyone would delay pulling the [Dungeon Crystal] that powers your enemies and the portal for so long. First Hump shouldn't have delayed getting the crystal out. And as soon as Hump saw the portal, he should have run back to pull out the Crystal. Then standing around talking to the Demon when he should have run back to pull out the crystal. If you stab yourself in the chest and blame fate for the wounds you take, then you are an idiot. Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.

SwiftFate

..I like Karlac. I don't buy into the whole 'all demons bad' thing in fantasy. They are sentient and have their own goals and motives. They may be inherently chaotic, but I feel like once you reach a certain level of power, that just comes with the territory regardless of origin. Bud was kind of just your typical religious zealot here. Rude. I guess that aspect of him adds quite the complexity to Hump's group. Hump is honestly already proven to be the type of guy that will at least talk to an unknown. Walt is the perfect example. I feel like most other people never would have given him a chance, but Hump was basically just like 'eh screw it'.

George R

Super awesome chapter

Debiruman

Bud shouldn't have told the demon his name, but maybe his true name may only apply for the demon to target him.

Alex Maher

In terms of their name or personality? They aren't supposed to be

Akki

Karlac Gormoth seemed very much like a devil from D&D.

Abdulmohsen

"Hump took it and was heaved to his feet. “Thank you.” this sentence is redundant also.


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