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Chapter 405 - Well Earned Reward

🕑 Added 2024-12-18 02:32:10 +0000 UTC

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Federico

This paragraph is duplicated “You have been granted the right to take a single item from the vault each,” the steward said."

Alex Maher

I try not to do it too much as I end up with mages of book entries that appear really awkward on the page. Is it something you feel is missing?

George R

Awesome chapter

Fernando Roman

Nah, the gear upgrades he got in Book 5 were mentioned but not described in the tome like in previous books. Maybe he’s moving away from that.

NameGame

He may get better at charging, or find an item to help with that in the future. Plus, with storage items, having a broad variety that he can swap out is beneficial...not that he"s at that point yet. To reach higher capability I'd expect him to want as many items as possible. I would. Rings on every finger, necklace, earrings, pendants, hat, gloves, boots, robes, staff, wand, bags, belts, buckles, as much as he can. Trigger for an effect, or always on passives...if your life is on the line, would you rather have more options, or less?

Akki

Some powerful wizards in D&D have dozens if not hundreds of magical items. They love collecting this stuff, even if they don't need it as they grow more powerful and I get the feeling Hump is on his way to do the same.

Samuel Robinson

I’m new to this Patreon so I don’t know if you want chapter critiques, if not just ignore the rest and thank you for this series it has become one of my favorites in a long time. I’ve loved everything so far with book 6, But something was feeling off about this chapter I just re-read the previous 2 and then this one and I think it’s the pacing. In isolation this chapter reads fine but going from one to the next it feels quite rushed. This was their big reward for the events of the last book and it almost feels brushed off, here is a list of the loot and look heavily guarded impressive buildings. Also Hump is starting to feel laden down. 2 pendants 2 rings 1 band (I’m assuming a band is a bracelet or perhaps a circlet?) 1 broach/pin The BOIP Battle robes Enchanted boots The Staff of Damnation The silver sprig A generic wand A bag of holding The lich's phylactery The enchanting stylus Nisha And I’m sure I’m forgetting something… It’s getting to be a lot, I think the new ring and the band could be deleted for a battle robe upgrade maybe to a gold tier robe. I worry when there gets to be too much that things get lost. How much of this gear does Hump have to manually recharge? He already has to pour essence into his staff to recharge the shield and sprig, into his book to empower his tier 5 and 6 insta spells. He also has to give some to Walt and his spirit well requires some everyday too. I’m starting to understand that this might have been one of the more daunting chapters to write simply because of how complicated adding gear becomes.

Shirai

I'm curious if we will get to see the new items appear in the Book. The last time we got equipment we did right?

Oldfaithful

Hump goes to a bar, gets drunk and the pendent immediately gets stolen or lost in a bar fight... I can see it already

giann flroesca

the trend is usually his gear gets ripped to shreds by the new bigbad so prob not gonna be too hard

Armo

All the new equipment is going to be difficult to keep track of. Hopefully it doesn’t just disappear in the long term from being forgotten about… Or maybe the power scaling will make it irrelevant, I don’t know.

Samuel Robinson

Good chapter, a little light on dialogue, I think I would have liked a little more conversations in the royal vault it went by quite quickly. Not too many errors a few words here and there and a duplicate paragraph “You have been granted the right to take a single artifact each,” the steward announced,….” How long does it take you to decide on equipment changes? It’s an instant change to the power balance and something else to keep track of. Especially this time as each of them picked up 4 new pieces.


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