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Chapter 406 - Elenvine Academy

🕑 Added 2024-12-23 03:14:42 +0000 UTC

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George R

Awesome chapter and oh no

lenkite

> Hump was pleased to have his Bag of Holding for his spellbook WARNING! Story Error Detected! His spellbook was already proven to be impossible to store in a dimensional artifact.

NameGame

It seems to me that, were I the headmaster of a great and ancient wizard academy, I'd want to flex and flaunt the prestige and power of the academy. I think I'd enlist the top earth mages in residence, over a period of years, to work on the stone. A marble building? Flex it, use magic to meld the marble together so it's as if the entire academy, every block, every wall, every floor and ceiling and statue, all as a single united piece of marble. No cuts, no separate sections, just solid and whole. Nobody anywhere would have anything like that, even kings and lords. Nobody could. Thanks for the chapter. P.S. BEWARE HUMP, THE MAGICAL HAMMER OF NERF IS SWINGING FOR YOU!

Armo

Torvik Malvek… a friend or an enemy? I’m looking forward to seeing more!

Notcreepycreeper

If you’re putting more thought into rewards, maybe do the same for Bud and Dylan too? I’m sure the shield/bracer will help. It’s just they don’t seem very personalized or interesting

Samuel Robinson

I was one of the dissenting comments on the last chapter. I didn’t think he was becoming too powerful I want to see him go past rank 7 if it’s possible, but I did think he was becoming encumbered. I don’t like when things get forgotten. There were things that weren’t used in the last book at all. His staff’s shield and the enchanting stylus for example. I feel like I would have liked to see him choose a very powerful single use item, like the phoenix feather. It would be something that no one would forget, and the anticipation for him to use it would build perhaps over even more than one book. Also, a large part of what has made Hump as strong as he is, is his ability to overcome the impossible. It was said in the last book that Bud, Dylan and Emilia were advancing so quickly because they were on the front lines of battle pushing themselves day after day.

Samuel Robinson

Excellent chapter, with an exciting lead for the next one! I didn’t notice any errors, I had a question on a word choice though. Very “almost” killed the old man. (Nearly?) Also if Hump couldn’t store the BOIP in Celaine’s belt why can he put it into his bag of holding? I had assumed it was Glyndaril refusing to be put into a dimensional storage space?

MAS

I disagree with the feedback saying he has become too powerful. Hump needs to be a bit OP. He is constantly being thrust into a confrontation with something more powerful than him. It’s exhausting.

Logan

well... I wonder how much of the Academy is going to be left in 3 or 4 chapters... any bets?

LawBear2005

It’s really cool seeing you take feedback! I’m personally really enjoying the story as it heavily reminds me of my d&d days. Thanks for writing and doing what you do!


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