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Chapter 414 - Debriefing

🕑 Added 2025-01-29 19:45:19 +0000 UTC

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Synod

“The decision would be easier once Wizard Aldric was here to advise.” Little grammar issue here, could go two ways: -> …WILL be easier once Wizard Aldric IS here to advise. ->…would be easier IF Wizard Aldric was here to advise. That or just remove it from dialogue and put it into narration, no changes necessary. TFTC!

George R

Great chapter

NameGame

20 gold per year seems like a lot. Am I behind on Hump's finances? I know he has been doing better financially with some assets lately, equipment and a house for example, but he doesn't exactly have a steady income stream. He also has a dragon to keep fed. Is he in a position to commit to 20g/yr? Does he even have 20g right now?! I usually think of him as functionally broke, has a bit of coin in his pocket for food and so on but not exactly Scrooge McDuck swimming in a vat of money. If not for his patron in Sheercliff, he'd be homeless as well...he still sort of is, it's his in theory but it's still on their land and staffed by their people. Thanks for the chapter!

Schillerschuppe

-And if the gorger had a lair filled with tressures like the one in Sheercliff, he’d quite like to uncover that too.- I think that should be Fishers Lake? And thanks for the chapter. I like that Nisha is getting more of a role to play

Suraj Rodrigo

Tftc


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