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Chapter 419 - Second Expedition

🕑 Added 2025-02-16 21:16:09 +0000 UTC

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Jason Hornbuckle

You said they had to take Nisha back to the estate and then she's in the Remnant Realm with them

Jason Hornbuckle

it's kind of weird to go from the bar where his party was waiting for him to the training square to the safe house so quickly and so abruptly

1FantasyFanatic

Oh okay gotcha. My bad. I thought Hump had already dismissed the Pantheon as mortals and was now mulling over the idea of a creator God but then discounting that idea due to the existence of evil. Thanks for the clarification!

Alex Maher

Just a quick thing to consider, you're talking about God and a creator god, but the religious beliefs of Alveron are that the Pantheon are the gods that created them and the world, along with a number of other gods too. Hump's finding evidence that contradicts that idea and is developing his opinion based off that. And the gods and their Chosen are supposed to stop evil, yet somehow it persists and there is so much corruption amongst even the Chosen.

1FantasyFanatic

People are entitled to their beliefs and Hump’s is one most have heard before that “because evil exists there can’t be a God.” But frankly I find that pretty darn stupid reasoning. If you allow people free will, some will abuse it. Maybe God doesn’t want to turn all sentient beings into mindless obedient slaves that experience no hardships, no opportunities, no victories, no defeats, no love, no loss, no free will, just mindless obedience for all eternity. Maybe. Heck maybe this fantasy world’s creator deity simply doesn’t care. So whether from a moral standpoint or a purely logical one, Hump’s reasoning simply doesn’t make sense and is frankly quite juvenile. Just thought I’d point that out as I am hoping for some future character growth. That said Hump is only 18 and acting like it feels realistic so I would call that good writing. Anyway TFTC!

Samuel Robinson

I think it was intended as a joke she made. Pretty sure they shared a room.

Brinley Millender

i like this a lot better!!

Alex Maher

Changes have been made

Alex Maher

I should have thought of it. something like 75% of my readers are american so if you hadn't pointed it out, that would have probably happened a lot lol

NameGame

Thanks for the explanation. I was so confused about what was going on, lol.

Alex Maher

I didnt think of the translation issue here. First floor is the one above ground floor to me. And it is a three story house. I'll do a better decription of the house but it's a tall, thin terraced house that's 3 stories tall.

Alex Maher

I think you've hit the nail on the head. I'll see what I can do

NameGame

Hmmm, maybe? I wasn't aware of that. But that would mean this is at least a 3 story tall house, since Hump is staying on the floor above. Is a 3 story house perfectly ordinary, as this one was described? That seems sort of gigantic and that it would stand out quite a bit, and it wasn't mentioned if there's a basement or how large the lot is. It could be a mansion, practically. Even just a 3 story house...that's an uncommmon neighborhood where that's normal and ordinary, to me.

Sean T

USA/Canada - first floor means same level as ground Europe/Asia/etc - first floor means the level above ground floor. Could be this?

Adunn

Humps relationship with celaine feels super awkward right now, I think part of the reason is that for the most part hump hasn’t really initiated anything, he just responds to what celaine does. But it also feels a but weird because despite what happened a few chapters ago, we haven’t really gotten to see them address the relationship 1 on 1 about expectations and whatnot. It’s all been in public, joking about it with friends.

NameGame

I'm confused. "“Don’t get too excited,” she whispered in his ear. “I’m taking the bedroom on the first floor. You and Nisha can have the top one.” “Right,” Hump said. “Of course. I’ll take the top one, yeah.” She giggled as she pulled away, her face red as she went back to the living room and picked up her bag, then headed toward the staircase. “Come on Nisha. You can help me put my stuff away.” Nisha bolted after her, scrambling up the stairs like an oversized dog." So why is she taking her stuff upstairs if she's staying on the first floor and Hump is staying upstairs? Did I take crazy pills today? Thanks for the chapter!

Leander

If you know where your enemy is, you can spy on their movements, run sabotage ops, etc.

Rajeev Roy

Honestly the military plan does not make sense instead of strengthening where they know the attack will come they are trying to find the enemy base what good would that do? The small group can't survive a full on warlock army anyways


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