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Chapter 421 - The Old World

🕑 Added 2025-02-23 04:00:44 +0000 UTC

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Hell 5pawn

I can just imagine someone commenting, "I can't keep my tomatoes alive in my garden, and here you have a vibrant spider plant in your pack? How's that fair?"

George R

Great chapter

NameGame

Perhaps Dylan should bring a potted plant or two. Just to set next to his bedroll at night, make things a little more homey, haha. Thanks for the chapter.

TheLunaticCo

Locator beacons have already been shown to have a weakness to anti magic, so a non essence based system would make sense as a backup.

lenkite

It was conveyed that a bunch of Shades can prevent the locator beacon from functioning. So, its kinda unreliable for the primary threat in this land.

Alex Maher

They have locator beacons that dont have a range limit here

lenkite

Its a bit weird no body is carrying signal flares for emergencies. Rocket flares are well within the tech of their time and in this flat land would be seen for dozens of miles

Adunn

The changes to 416 were really good.

Oldfaithful

Quiet a few spelling and wording errors in this chapter, I enjoyed the reworking you did in the previous chapter and clears up Humps and Celaine relationship alot better.

Rajeev Roy

Some parts of the chapter feels a bit stilted as if reading a report rather than the story. Appreciate the changes made to the other chapters also minor repetition with celaine and the glowwater


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