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Chapter 436 - Veiled Threats

🕑 Added 2025-04-16 03:45:35 +0000 UTC

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Dylan Alexander

Main character syndrome.

Jason Hornbuckle

"The man barked a laugh. “I would not be so sure. From the sounds of it, you have made an enemy of every warlock out there, and that reputation only grows by the sounds of it.” you said "from the sounds of it" twice here Also it seems kind of weird that Hump thinks he's the only person in the Kingdom who can see anything for what it really is

George R

Great chapter

Alex Maher

It sure did lol. Left my notes in at the end.

Alex Maher

Fixed Wizard Gregory, and that was me accidentally leaving some of my notes in.

RainyCats

I think he just left some old text in there

Lord M

Looks like your brain gave out there towards the end. Make sure to rest when you can.

NameGame

“We will talk again soon,” Wizard Gregory said. Is Gregory changing jobs mid chapter? Prince every other mention. Also, cutting off mid word: "veiled threat, bu" and "a veiled st" something funky happened late in the chapter? I wonder if Hump missed a trick or made a sound decision. He could have made himself disappear magically, and had the conversation that way. Might have unnerved Kassius and caused him to slip up...but it also would have tipped Hump's hand that he could do that. Hrm. Food for thought. Thanks for the chapter.

Diarmid McArdle

But the rest of it was bloody awesome I was worried hump was going to do something stupid but that conversation went perfectly the picture of two friends reuniting after a long time apart I reckon the king is going to quietly have Kassius killed and then use Hump as scapegoat

yosef melul

The writing at the end of the chapter reads awkwardly


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