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Chapter 449 - Erupting Core

🕑 Added 2025-06-04 01:13:08 +0000 UTC

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Jason Hornbuckle

"She was the only one of them that had not reached Rank 5 yet," "battles are fought by soldiers that hold little individual strength" When you're talking about people you use "who". "That" is for objects

Alex Maher

You've raised some good points! I've made some oversights here (one of which being I forgot to have the book level up with him a few chapters ago......). Seems I have some editing to do.

NameGame

He's a master of it.

NameGame

"any reference to the Path to Heaven" I have it on good authority that it's not a path, it's a stairway. "“In here are spellbooks containing Tier 5, 6, and 7 spells,” Aldric said. “You may take three.”" Um. Why? "For those that failed, Tier 7 is the furthest their magic ever goes. And with that comes a fair bit of choice.”" So we're talking millenia here, right? You're seriously telling me that the Book of Infinite Pages hasn't been exposed to those spells in all this time? It picked up the spell from the book Hump held just by being there, as it picks up all spells cast or written down near it. Like...the Book should have all this, or nearly all of it, and probably quite a bit more that it had encountered in the wild but hadn't made it to this particular archive. Not that Hump should have every spell ever made, but it should already have a lot, a LOT...and that's not even taking into account that he can wander through the phylactery and see what, if anything, the Book picks up from the books there, which may be quite a few other (possibly horrific, but still) spells from a life and undeath of a long lived and powerful Lich. It made sense before Hump put the Book in it's place, but they're pretty much on the same page now and he is stronger than he's ever been. Shouldn't he be getting spells from the Book first and foremost, with other spells being more of a "mm, ahh, that's interesting, very nice I'm sure"? He's still acting like the Book is brand new and has no spells, or like it's still restricting him from them, and I don't understand why. Is Celene planning to make a cloak out of a Prince? I have concerns. Though I suppose that if you're attending a formal event, wearing a Prince is probably going to be fancier than what anyone else wears. Completely off topic, but do they ever train with the dragon? Obviously wood weapons, but if nothing else they could teach her how to fight people effectively and give them some training on fighting a four legged powerhouse. She does like to play. Despite the lengthy comment about the spell, I'm not like flipping out, it just took many words, lol. Thanks for the chapter!

George R

Great chapter

Marun

Poor Hump, always gets selected as the bait.


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