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Chapter 468 - Divine Posession

🕑 Added 2025-08-13 02:02:49 +0000 UTC

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vetsin

Busy having a chat, like the 9th circle isn't about to get a rampage

Armo

I’ve been thinking where this series could go before the upcoming climactic conclusion of the current book, and here are some of the scenarios I’ve come up with. Leave your future scenarios in a comment if you have any! 1) Hump’s gonna destroy the seal, set the tree on fire, and the now-shattered veil will scatter them and Godfrey to vastly different locations. Next book is Hump’s party exploring a different world, once again as a small party of adventurers despite all their achievements. OR 2) Hump will hit Godfrey with the radiant essence empowered White Flame, and go to revive Kaisura and Dorn with Light’s radiant essence. Kaisura and Dorn, now revitalised, will finish the fight they started with Godfrey. The tree may be set on fire with radiant essence, too, or Hump may use his stored spellbook essence to cast another Erupting Core at the tree to fell it. The city of Elenvine is saved, though as always with heavy casualties, and Hump and party gets recognition as a party of heroes for killing Anthony and destroying the tree. But questions surrounding what, exactly, enabled him to manipulate the seal remain… and Hump’s many enemies slowly close in on him from within and without Alveron.

Alex Maher

That's fair. I'll keep it in mind for when I edit it and see if i can tighten it up.

Alex Maher

I'll need to describe that better. The chamber is chapel sized with the seal in the middle. So it's pretty big. They're hiding in one half.

Alex Maher

Bowl cut shall return. I'll fix that, thanks.

Dean Lauffer

BANGER

George R

Great chapter

Jason Hornbuckle

It's hard to believe Godfrey runs into the chamber and doesn't trip over the dragon or the six people in there

Larc

Hmm. Something about the pacing in this finale is a bit off to me. This chapter in particular felt a bit filler-y, perhaps better included in the previous with some trimming? At the end of the day, people going slackjawed at a goddess and Hump feeling essence surge in his channels for a full chapter doesn't have that gripping pace of a finale for me. Still, excited to see what comes next.

Armo

I’m just hoping this is not the prelude to a second arc of Hump being captured.

Armo

Ah, Hump. Way too distracted at a critical moment. Hopefully he has enough time to destroy the tree or somehow kill Godfrey. And escape. Can’t imagine that Hump has enough time for an erupting core v2, or that it would be enough. He’ll have to White Flame it, one way or another. Damn, Kaisura and Dorn being dead is… really unfortunate. Godfrey being unopposed is really bad.

giann flroesca

TBF a literal god descended to help him, possess his GF's body, and THEN is helping him break a seal by absorbing another god's power from said seal that theoretically will open the gates to hell when broken. give my mans a break lol.

C

.... rude on you for that one...

Adunn

Yeah it feels like Hump wasted a lot of time just looking around.

NameGame

I think that's how authors feed. Like vampires drink blood, authors feast upon our anguish at cliffhangers.

NameGame

Found one of your edits: "As sudden and overwhelming as it was" that sentence, and the one after it are almost the same just with an edit pass. The impact on everyone of Owalyn decending into Celaine was fantastic, nailed it. The Prince will never be the same hahaha. He's always going to wonder what aces Hump has up his sleeve. No more Rodney Dangerfield the Hedge Wizard anymore, he's DEFINITELY getting some respect after that. It's not every day you see someone get the Divine to show up to lend a hand personally. Gods summoned, Chosen: 0, Hedge Wizard: 1. Inb4 Bud's crisis of faith, lol. Ok probably not, but still funny. Come on Hump, quit dawdling, let it loose already you daydreamer! No sense of urgency, I swear. Just stopping to see the sights and not staying focused on the task at hand. Punishment is in order. Bring back the bowl cut! Thanks for the chapter!

Joshua Kern

That was really good but arrgghhhh dang cliffhangers lol


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