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Chapter 476 - Natives and Griffins

🕑 Added 2025-09-17 02:47:23 +0000 UTC

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Andrew Woodard

So glad I found your patreon! I didn't want to wait another year! "The group of natives stared at them in shock." "Hump broke through the treeline a few seconds after Bud and Dylan." Those two paragraphs read like you rewrote the first paragraph and didn't delete it maybe? Restated several details. Natives, artifacts healing, the vehicle, etc. Very fun chapter, regardless!

Alex Maher

Someone else pointed that out too. I completely forgot Nisha! Going to edit that in before next chapter is out

Roy Robinson

“That griffin’s about to meet the Frostfire Knight.” what a great line. Would have expected Nisha to get involved against airborn enemies, seemed like a perfect opportunity for her to show her stuff in a way we don't get to see often since most of the fight scenes are on the ground if not indoors.


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