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"Forbidden Love 1" - Patreon version
🕑 Added 2020-01-28 18:48:27 +0000 UTCHere is the first episode of my new series, I hope you will enjoy watching it as much as I took creating it.
Sorry for the delay, I fell asleep :)
Comments
pat
In this episode, I tried to heed several suggestions that you gave me. Especially the lighting during the penetration scene, this is why the penetration scene is done slowly so that we can see everything.
Liam Devlin
Please get some rest, dear Pat :) You've earned it!
Liam Devlin
(Continued) Using "Fired" is for employees by employers. Storyboard: The women & futa are LOVELY! It is adorably done how Shannon & Sonia become interested, and drawn to the Library back shelves area. THAT looks to be a very hot scene indeed! (Hugs). My first impressions. Will go and follow it again side by side story/ pictures now!
Liam Devlin
I would use the either the words "expelled" or "dismissed" instead of "fired" in the storyline Pat. Both refer to the abrupt leaving from school under a cloud of less than auspicious circumstances (Emily's faux pas in the toilet, e.g.).
pat
post your feedback :)
