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"Sensual Workout 1" - Patreons
🕑 Added 2020-07-03 22:07:18 +0000 UTCAnd here it is, the first episode of the brand new series, which will last at least 5 or 6 episodes.
This episode is totally different from what you are used to seeing, due to the nature of the story and the protagonists, I focus everything on the fact that it is 2 friends and therefore the dialogues and images follow this logic .
I am very very proud of this first episode, which will have required me a lot more work than the other series. I LOVE this new series and the 2 girls.
For those who find that there is not enough sex scene, it's normal, it's the first episode, I have to present the characters, their relationships etc ... you will have more, as usual , in the next episodes :)
Comments
pat
Thx, but unfortunately no, it is either with or without text. Why? don't you like the text?
Peediddy
Pat, great work but are you likely to release these series' without text?
Liam Devlin
Don't forget to relax and take a break, dear Pat!
Liam Devlin
Yw :) I know the feeling about getting tired at the end of a project. Don't worry, we your patrons will help you edit! <3 (Hugs)
pat
thx :) just saw my mistake n page 63 too :p, sometimes i'm very tired
Liam Devlin
Straight up, no sh#t, this is a great, superb start to a new series! I second Camel's assessment here, but will add that the playful banter, run & chase games the two girls/ young ladies gives we viewers a plausible prior relationship-friendship leading to the event that changes Cheryl--and then Cleo's lives. The double posted statement on page 63 from Cheryl is the only dialogue error. In summation,..I LUV this one, and where you're going with it.
Camel
aww man! you it ended right before you got to the good part!... well it was still one of the hotter ones, the dialogues do add a lot more flavor to it, sex scenes become so much more erotic when you got good sexy talk and such to go along with the pictures, and you get a feel for the personalities of the characters so you can connect with them better.. looking forward to the buttsex next release. hope you will try to continue writing dialogues, oh and you messed up the copy pasting(i assume) on page 63 quite a bit there but other than that there were only the odd spelling error
pat
give me your feedback very important for me, it's the first episode and i need to know what do you all think about this new series, ty :)
