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Patron Editing: Borne of Caution Act 2 : Ch 6
🕑 Added 2022-08-26 00:10:00 +0000 UTCAll yours. I proofread as best I can but I'm running a bit of a fever and might have missed something. Please mark it and I'll fix it.
Also, regarding the thanks section at the bottom. After thinking it over, I've decided that if you guys want to, you can sign there with whatever name you want to show your support. It'll save time for everyone and insure only the people who want it can have their name on it. Have at it.
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Comments
Andres
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Hector Gregorio
Good work brother
Conspiracy
dang those are some distinctly sinister undertones in that conversation with maxie yikes
Gabriel Morales
Great chapter. Signed as woodN_forks instead of my actual name.
Straven
That little kitten was just flat out heart stopping A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E!
K
If Ninetales could do something like that,(mind control Courtney) I get the feeling she would most definitely do it. If it weren't for the kind of person Lee is Ninetales is giving vibes she would like to be preemptively vengeful on his behalf. Makes me wonder how she will react when/if corvi comes back.
WirelessGrapes
And considering the tone of some of Courtney's thoughts, it might not be just the protocols that magma put into her head. Brendan saves the damsel and breaks her conditioning? Fun subplot perhaps
Green0Photon
Uh oh, they got master stranger protocols ๐
V
Got goosebumps from the dark nature of Magma at the end there. Great chapter.
Orion Dye
Thanks for the chapter. Get some rest man.
Tyler Tate
Loved the chapter, hope you feel better!
Take care! Hope you feel better
