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Patreon Editing: Borne of Caution Act 2 Ch 8
🕑 Added 2022-09-21 08:25:33 +0000 UTCThank you patreon for saying the post went through then not showing up.
EDITS: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17UIpGregPlWsJ37RaDdl-HcV5anp-7hqwCoHxKau7Qk/edit?usp=sharing
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aTlTui0hbBNnau6uowtNO2rUD0e8m_jeKvi2TA0CYaA/edit?usp=sharing
This was done a few hours ago, but for some reason when I hit "Publish" patreon just sat and loaded forever. Lets give her another go.
Comments
MooMoo195
I wonder if at some point grovyle's quick attack will evolve into extremespeed
Straven
I'm seeing a very possible win, not without one hell of a fight but I don't doubt this one will make the streams/online forums BLOW THE ***** UP!
CMDR Dantae
Breathtaking this chapter was breathtaking. This fight will be Magnificient, I'm anticipating it already. All of your fights have been marvels so far, the Gym battles especially. Ah, I can imagine it already. Though, this might be tough for Lee... Even with his team in top shape, is he about to lose a Gym battle for the first time? Or will he manage a draw like with Brawly?
Jacob Warner
What Stephen said, and they also call her “Gym heir” and not “Gym Leader”
Stephen Place
Earlier that chapter: "It's just… My grandpa, the current Leader, has been having me take over more and more of the challengers lately, and he might want me to battle you. I thought I would have more time to prepare for you, is all."
CMDR Dantae
It says Lee and Brendan will fight Flannery, but Act 2: Chapter 4 has Lee say this: Lee's face is much more collected than the buzzing thoughts in his head, Vulpix muses to herself. "You know this means you're making Vulpix into a giant problem for your own match against us in a week, right?" He asks with a smirk. Moore waves him off. "Bah. Small price to pay to receive a brand new move and witness the birth of a Ninetales." After a beat, Moore adds, "In some Kanto legends, they say witnessing a Vulpix evolve into a Ninetales is said to grant a divine sort of luck upon all who watch. Did you know that?" "I do now," Lee quips. So now I am really confused. Is Lee fighting Flannery two weeks before her debut for some reason or is this just a typo?
BlueGraine
Ninetales seems so far ahead of the rest of the team. The real question is how far ahead she is of Moore's.
Rehan
The last bit was brilliant! The early and middle sections could use some polish, though I can't identify exactly where that polish needs to be, it just felt a tad bit stiff, still excellent though
Jaxer30
Man has bgm and opening speech, Lee's in trouble! Love the chapter and the fact that they'll come more consistently, have a good one!
V
That ending was epic, loved the chapter. Hype way to start the day.
Green0Photon
Bruh moment. God damn I'm glad you're updating faster now because I'd die if I had to wait a month or two after this cliffhanger
Gabriel Morales
Holy shit that’s some Borne of Desire energy from Moore at the end. I love the esoteric moments, love the “anime hard lines blurring” mental images I get from the honor-bound rage screams. Great chapter all in all.
Lucaman_P
I could see interlude about Ash protest i want to fight moore like lee but get unofficial match after gym battle 6 vs 6 instead.
Ethan Prince
Hehe boy. I love this. I hope grovyle gets his time to shine.
Planetace
Lee expected to face a simple story progression boss fight, only to accidentally hit the necessary checkmarks to activate the secret boss that is 10x harder than the final boss.
