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Borne of Caution CH16: Editing and Sneak Peek
🕑 Added 2020-12-17 02:38:17 +0000 UTCSo the latest chapter is done, and after thinking it over, rather than going through the hassle of picking a few people and making others wait, we'll do this:
Patrons get a link to the raw doc and can read it at their leisure. The doc is in comment mode, so you can suggest changes like corrections and what-not. When it's all spiffed up, I'll post it to the usual places.
Note: As to not unfairly restrict the story from non-patron readers, the longest I'm willing to hold it is 24 hours.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Xcuqlm0QDxs96h3c_qOtoNfjQD2Z3yH7p_cCZAF1uY/edit?usp=sharing
Happy reading!
Comments
Meadow
I'm almost certain that scribbled name is Mewtwo
Kendelle Trotter
No Lucario hurts a lot. It hurts but the reason is good and I get it. Maybe he'll get lucky and find a little Riolu that'll feel his emotions and give him a hug instead of being stressed. Luxray is a great choice for Xray vision and just design wise. Nothing about Persian's Dex entries really stuck out to me personally. Seviper and Zangoose are an odd choice but interesting enough I guess. Flygon is an awesome dragon!!!!! He's the Spirit of the Desert too. Pretty badass nickname.
BrokenOlive
Neat. I would do it but I'll start to automatically pr it, so I'll decidedly wait.
