Early Viewing: Borne of Caution - Act 2 - Finale
🕑 Added 2024-11-20 23:12:33 +0000 UTCHere we go. Please enjoy.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YX-OGAOfRrghz7TJk2sWeuVYD_2FocokvzrwH6k6UCo/edit?usp=sharing
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daly.c
Well... that escalated quickly.
ricchi ricchi
Where did the picture come from? Was it commissioned cause that's really well done. Also GIRATINA AHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
FillerText
https://youtu.be/YZNkpCjoqCk?si=4vpeY4vEyFkG5JQV
Sum Ting Wong
It's mentioned in act 2: chapter 23, about a dozen paragraphs in.
Luco
Wait really? Did i miss that on multiple re-reads AND while actively looking for it just now? In which chaper is it mentioned?
Sum Ting Wong
Not sure if foreshadowing but Lees 'mon capacity was increased to SEVEN when he got Sylveon...
Luco
Hello there, General Griev..., uh, I mean, Griseous. Sadly, only Lee/Nine could make that wordplay, because it absolutey works as one of Zinnias nicknames. The crater lake is usually flat as a mirror, no? So Giratina could absolutely just fly out, right? Also, what a cliff. Now to wait for a few months as Caution goes on the backburner.
WhatAFungi
I KNEW it was garatina! Love Zinnia’s new outfit. Can’t wait to see what you hit us with next arc. Also, I can’t wait to see Norman get smacked down HARD.
Runaway_Cactuar
yay!
Soah1086
Nice art and song choice at the end.
Straven
That was one hell of an ending!
V01D
Your YouTube link is borked for me
Jericho Rising
I'd actually completely forgotten Giratina was dragon typed. That clears things up mighty well. Great chapter, I almost expected it to end when I saw the picture of zinnia coming up in the Google doc, great depiction by the by. While this ending marks a Hiatus for Borne of Caution, will you be continuing your other works or taking a full on break from writing?
nasapeepolover116
Oh my god i absolutely loved this
Yona Ksr
these Sceptile seeds could be used as grenades
Nathan Ganesan
Also, appropriately eldritch god styling, well done.
Nathan Ganesan
Giratina is able to create rifts in space-time, so perhaps he is responsible for Lee being here in the first place?
MrPerson0
After a long two years, what a way to end the act with that reveal! Can't wait for the next one, hope you can take as long a break as you need!
Glitched Knights
"Sorry about this folks." Inhale. Exhale. "...ITS MOTHERFUCKING GIRATINA!!! YES! YES! JUST-! YES! I FUCKING LOVE THIS GUY!"
Koutetsu Oni
Holy hell. Giratina with a Shiro Sagisu backing track. Absolutely excellent and sent chills down my spine. However, I am suitably anxious to know what the dragon of death wants with Lee?
michael schiff
I can't believe that Giratina is calling Lee and ninetails about thier cars extended Warranty
Dizzy
Honestly, it makes the most sense as Giritina represents the underworld. Lee should be dead by all counts, but I am so excited to see what the reason for reaching out is I can't sit still wondering what he wants from our hero.
Phoenix Bugg
I can't say anything without saying spoilers but I love this I love this a lot
wretched Cat
YES!!! After so long finally a new chapter! Amazing as always my friend, I kinda figured it was a legendary trying to contact Lee but I wasn't 100% sure it was Giratina. Hope to see more awesome chapters my man.