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Thoughts #2
🕑 Added 2024-02-02 20:11:35 +0000 UTCA few things to get through.
AN 1: I got a few people who wanted me to close up the plot whole, which was “What happened to his parent's stuff?”. Honestly, I still couldn’t make up my mind to put more detail on it because I was on the fence as to how much I should give him and if he was to get a family home, then where would it be, how b extravagant it should be or would it even matter, so I kind of still left it a little vague. I can decide in later chapters I guess.
I'm also thinking of doing a time skip to 11, I don't want to bother too much with normal school. Let me know what you guys think.
AN 2: Some people also wanted me to remove the aspect of the system that lets him summon people. So...
I initially wanted to summon people in a way that they would be given the choice in their home dimension to join him. Ciri, for example, would have been given the choice when she tried to stop the white frost in the Witcher games but died (one of the possible endings, to my knowledge). He can still meet those characters as there will still be world travelling, but just not through summons.
Long story short. No people-summoning? But MC can exchange that aspect of the system for points, 1% may not seem fair, but the system’s got to make a living too.
AN 3: As far as romance is concerned, there won't be one until he is 18. So don't worry. Even if some of the characters like him, he won't be thinking about it until 18.
He will be focused on learning magic, going to other worlds and people trying to bring him into politics because of his power. Don't get me wrong, I won't purposefully write him as a dense character, at least I'll try not to. But he just won't act on it until he's older.
AN 4: I'm still on the fence in regards to the love interest(s). That's why I wanted to start slow, I might stick with one love interest to get better at writing romance as I have no idea how to do it well, or at all for that matter, as this is my first try at writing fanfiction.
Love interest(s) still undecided. Also not as important now due to age.
AN 5: I really like the [Livable pocked Dimension] idea, it will be expensive so it will be between that and the [World Hopping] ability which he will have to buy now that the people summoning is gone. The discount is only for one-time use, so he will have to put in some work to get the one he didn't buy. It's my way of stopping him from buying too powers and abilities in just a few days being here, he’s already over powered so....
I kind of want the [World Travel] first, so that he can go to other worlds during the summer or something. While also having the limitation of only using it maybe 2 times a year. Let me know what you think.
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Holosagewolf
okay for the whole plot hole if you want to fill it you could just say it was a drunk driver. very simple very cliche. but it gets the job done
