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Chapter 12: Hogwarts

🕑 Added 2024-03-13 17:04:39 +0000 UTC

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Anthony Maxwell

So there's really no reason anyone would think that.

Anthony Maxwell

Uhh why would death eaters plant him in the school?? when it's an Open secret that most of the children in Slytherin are the children of death eaters that's pointless. As they have plenty of informants already via their own kids in Hogwarts.

Lightest_Reader

I'll get around to checking those.

Lightest_Reader

The plan was to have him slowly reveal that kind of stuff, like he's just a super quick learner instead of 'he already knew it', which would constantly have people asking who taught him and if death eater planted him in the school etc.

Anthony Maxwell

Personally I don't quite like the fact he's hiding his wandless magic. As I'm more interested in seeing the prospect of a character who doesn't really give a fuck revealing how much more skilled he is than the rest of his peers as long as it's not out of context magic. I don't really see a problem other than the fact it would probably send Dumbledore into Tom riddle flashbacks and destroy the self-esteem of his peers which are a bunch of 11-year-olds. But Who cares what they fucking think.

Anthony Maxwell

Couple spelling mistakes like you misspelled the word name when they did the roll call thing.


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