Competitive Advantage short story cover, draft #3
🕑 Added 2017-08-15 21:12:18 +0000 UTC Hmmm.Definitely need to switch out that weapon, don't we?
I guess we could say her armor is aluminum, which would be better protection than nothing and a hell of a lot lighter than bronze...
What do you guys think?
*Note - this will be for a short story with characters you guys have never seen before.
Comments
Blaise Corvin
Maybe both. :)
Micah Rutledge
Dang it! But holy cow that sounds fun. Any unique powers or cool orbs?
Zachary Martin
The weapon should be a knife. Also the character should be changed to Drax.
Zachary Martin
I totally thought that was supposed to be Mareen meeting the Rose minion (blossom?) for the first time.
Zachary Martin
Somebody owes you five smackeroos! :D
Blaise Corvin
It's going to follow a gang member out of a Berber city as her entire life and world view radically changes. It should be a lot of fun, and it's a cool worldbuilding opportunity for me.
Micah Rutledge
I love the names and concepts of your books. Have you heard of the orcanomics series? The are about to release the second book. Great premise. Murdering innocent "monsters" for profit. Buying stock in horde speculation.
Micah Rutledge
Well i WAS being flippant. What about my real question? What is this short story? Looks cool!
Blaise Corvin
Completely different artist. :)
Blaise Corvin
1. Yes. It's going to be a Ludus short story. 2. There will probably be character crossover
Micah Rutledge
This looks cool. What is this? Also 5 bucks says this is the artist you used for adoh. You know, cause it's good ;)
Lachezar
Is this in the delvers Universe? And if so are we gonna see them in the later delvers books? Also picture looks good :D