BlaiseCorvin
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Competitive Advantage short story cover, Final
🕑 Added 2017-08-21 23:32:34 +0000 UTC This is coming out after Delvers 3Blurb:
In the Delvers LLC universe, on the planet Ludus, life is cheap. Gangs of disillusioned young women roam the city streets of Bittertown in Berber, looking for trouble and usually finding it.
Nora’s childhood hadn’t given her many options in life. With nowhere else to go after she’d lost her family, she’d joined an old friend in a street gang and found an unlikely home there.
However, after circumstances force her to leave her second family, even causing her to flee Bittertown, she may need to find new allies in unlikely places. Nora is about to find out the hard way that Dolos orbs always complicate everything. Life is cheap, but power isn’t. Survival isn’t easy on Ludus, especially for a young woman like Nora. It would help if bounty hunters would stop chasing her, too.
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Blaise Corvin
Yeah you're right. I will ask for a revision
Micah Rutledge
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Linton Bowers
We can share the eye holes.
Micah Rutledge
Your kernning needs work. Looks like it says "Aludis" totally different planet :)
Micah Rutledge
I'm the eye hole man! Give me back my eye holes!
Blaise Corvin
Thanks. I definitely need to tweak the blurb a few times but this is the gist.
Linton Bowers
This sounds amazing! Looking forward to filling my eye holes with these words.
Linton Bowers
First!
